Twixt flame and claw (Haiku)
In grass fire thermals
feathers lazily fluttering
death waits in the wind
© K R Brandli 11/20/2011
Fay Slimm
Horrific to think on is this advent of nature Ken - - your title is telling and the haiku - just right.
Horrific to think on is this advent of nature Ken - - your title is telling and the haiku - just right.
Sandra Martyres
Great imagery in this well written haiku
Great imagery in this well written haiku
well captured ... fascinating, recognizing that the fire will flush out prey . Predators, always looking for an edge. Good job distilling this scene into haiku form.