Tracing Our Afterglow.
Our day appeared, just
.......................right in the annals of time.
Birthed from sheer need
......................we both blossomed a while.
That summer was dappled
..................... with passion's warm juice.
We tasted abandonment's
............................... .... joy in love's fruits.
Our shadow still stalks
...........................my tenuous mindscape
Plainly, with hindsight,
.................................... I catch escaping
It's traces, vibrating
...................................with our afterglow,
Oh what I learned then,
.............................how I needed to know.
Linda Ori
Interesting style, interesting content. Some encounters, although brief, teach us a great deal. Nothing is for naught.
Interesting style, interesting content. Some encounters, although brief, teach us a great deal. Nothing is for naught.
Pendemic
Very expressive write Fay. Memories can be bitter sweet, but this one serves as a reminder of a lesson learned.
Very expressive write Fay. Memories can be bitter sweet, but this one serves as a reminder of a lesson learned.
Lillian Susan Thomas
very nice imagery, Fay, a surreal delight
very nice imagery, Fay, a surreal delight
carol
a flash of sensual and a wonderful write
a flash of sensual and a wonderful write
beautiful reminiscing...