*The Red Dress in the Breeze
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Caressed to enfold your beautiful body the gentle breeze
Seems attracted to skim your every curve tightening your dress
To a Carmen’s level, provocative alluring, sensuous,
The stunning flowers behind you smile, inhaling your presence,
The red dress crowned with your shining black hair
Blocks out everything the eye can see except your lips.
This without a word beckons I to kiss,
The evening curtains close on the moon
Casting shadows for I to draw near,
The red dress glows in the dark
Both our arms gently hold each other,
We say nothing
Only... that kiss of bliss,
Amore,
Imagination makes love.
naida supnet
ONE CAN SEE BEYOND THE RED DRESS NICE
ONE CAN SEE BEYOND THE RED DRESS NICE
robyn selters
'the evening curtains close on the moon...' wonderfully, evocative writing
'the evening curtains close on the moon...' wonderfully, evocative writing
patspoems
This was such a romantic poem with amazing imagery. Loved the red dress. Great poetry Ken..... Pat
This was such a romantic poem with amazing imagery. Loved the red dress. Great poetry Ken..... Pat
MoonBee
Aaaah, I see you have a penchant for the pure passion (smile) ... This was a very lilting write (like the red dress in question) It was very soft in delivery, yet strong with emotion - that's a good skill in poetry writing. This poem is very picturesque - It makes the reader think they've walked in on a pretty moment of open-heartedness ... I truly enjoyed reading this one ... Excellent Write ... MoonBee
Aaaah, I see you have a penchant for the pure passion (smile) ... This was a very lilting write (like the red dress in question) It was very soft in delivery, yet strong with emotion - that's a good skill in poetry writing. This poem is very picturesque - It makes the reader think they've walked in on a pretty moment of open-heartedness ... I truly enjoyed reading this one ... Excellent Write ... MoonBee
Sally Plumb
I get the picture.
I get the picture.
lynnbglover
A very well written love poem, as I was drawn into the poem and became a part of the scene. That makes a good poem and even better, a good poet. Great Job.
A very well written love poem, as I was drawn into the poem and became a part of the scene. That makes a good poem and even better, a good poet. Great Job.
RAJ NANDY
KEN , Loved the idea in the last stanza ! Wish a day comes when we can start our bikes & cars with a kiss individually scanned like finger prints ! Thanks , -Raj
KEN , Loved the idea in the last stanza ! Wish a day comes when we can start our bikes & cars with a kiss individually scanned like finger prints ! Thanks , -Raj
LightH2O
So romantic...loved it!
So romantic...loved it!
Karin Anderson
I too love the evening curtains and the image caught my eye immediately. A superb love poem Ken as the red dress is a beautiful focus on which to dwell~
I too love the evening curtains and the image caught my eye immediately. A superb love poem Ken as the red dress is a beautiful focus on which to dwell~
nimal dunuhinga
O A lovely serenade........!
O A lovely serenade........!
Susan Jarvis
Romance with a scarlet flourish - I am with Fay on the 'evening curtains', a truly admirable line.
Romance with a scarlet flourish - I am with Fay on the 'evening curtains', a truly admirable line.
Fay Slimm
Lovely Ken - the phrase the "evening curtains close on the moon" -is a stunning description of allurement and love during a dark cloudy night.
Lovely Ken - the phrase the "evening curtains close on the moon" -is a stunning description of allurement and love during a dark cloudy night.
heather wilkins
beautiful love poem. "The red dress in the breeze", a great title.
beautiful love poem. "The red dress in the breeze", a great title.
seema chowdhury
nice and romantic.
nice and romantic.
mamta agarwal
a lovely, sensuous, provocative poem Ken; like the closing lines and vivid images throught the poem. it;s like a movie.
a lovely, sensuous, provocative poem Ken; like the closing lines and vivid images throught the poem. it;s like a movie.
Kesav V Easwaran
Beautiful, Ken...your romantic fantasy and imagination rocks!
Beautiful, Ken...your romantic fantasy and imagination rocks!
robyn selters
Wow! Sensuously beautiful, a romantic poem par exellence!
Wow! Sensuously beautiful, a romantic poem par exellence!
Lovely imagery... well penned.