Senryu Passionate Pleas
words, replacing tears
measures along a heartbeat
seeking to be heard
Dorothy Alves Holmes
A Poet Who Loves To Sing
RAJ NANDY
As Karin rightly says it is a deep & meaningful Haiku ! By looking at your photo I get the feeling - you bake lovely cakes & also play the piano well ! Am I right ? -Raj
As Karin rightly says it is a deep & meaningful Haiku ! By looking at your photo I get the feeling - you bake lovely cakes & also play the piano well ! Am I right ? -Raj
Philip
So much can be said in a simple little Senryu
So much can be said in a simple little Senryu
Karin Anderson
Deep and meaningful Dorothy and I admire Ben's comment as he has deciphered the images wonderfully~
Deep and meaningful Dorothy and I admire Ben's comment as he has deciphered the images wonderfully~
Sylvia Frances Chan
Short, but very loaded, Dorothy!! Again a jewel!! Only YOU can write this Senryu about WORDS..."Seeking to be heard",,,how sad..
Short, but very loaded, Dorothy!! Again a jewel!! Only YOU can write this Senryu about WORDS..."Seeking to be heard",,,how sad..
Ben Gieske
You have successfully created quite a few images in so few words with this one: words seeking/heart seeking to be heard and heartbeat/ measures evoke singing/a song. A woeful song at that. This must have been rather painful. Speaking words is not usually done until after the tears have flowed
You have successfully created quite a few images in so few words with this one: words seeking/heart seeking to be heard and heartbeat/ measures evoke singing/a song. A woeful song at that. This must have been rather painful. Speaking words is not usually done until after the tears have flowed
patspoems
Such wise and wonderful words Dorothy. Thank you..... Pat
Such wise and wonderful words Dorothy. Thank you..... Pat
Chaos1214
Yes... Tears indicate a problem, words define it.
Yes... Tears indicate a problem, words define it.
Ency Bearis
great senryu, to its true
great senryu, to its true
heather wilkins
so true. lovely writing.
so true. lovely writing.
seeking to be heard....HOW SWEET, Dorothy! See that good poets can influence other better ones, what a beautiful, peaceful Circle of Life! A bigger jewel now!! Thank you so much dear having visited me for a second time, you can also take a subcription on "my magazine".....thank YOU for your kindness....