In the middle
Surrounded by
a wall of people,
I cried,
saddened by
my solitude.
Kesav V Easwaran
Liked your usage of phrases- wall of people/my solitude...we often feel lonely in a crowd by way of losing our vision or identity...short, expressive, nice
Liked your usage of phrases- wall of people/my solitude...we often feel lonely in a crowd by way of losing our vision or identity...short, expressive, nice
Karin Anderson
So true and we can be really lonely in a crowd. The wall of people works well. A succinct write with a deep and meaningful message.
So true and we can be really lonely in a crowd. The wall of people works well. A succinct write with a deep and meaningful message.
LightH2O
Great write!
Great write!
Ralph L. Jones Jr.
Alone in a crowd. Everybody feel that way sometimes. This is more serious, I think, isolation (wall of people), or even alienation.
Alone in a crowd. Everybody feel that way sometimes. This is more serious, I think, isolation (wall of people), or even alienation.
Gita Ashok
A meaningful, antithetical write.
A meaningful, antithetical write.
heather wilkins
Just to have a little peace and quiet can be a blessing sometimes. nice.
Just to have a little peace and quiet can be a blessing sometimes. nice.
patspoems
Sometimes the more people that are there the lonelier we can feel. Simple words that express a very sad situation. Many blessings.... Pat
Sometimes the more people that are there the lonelier we can feel. Simple words that express a very sad situation. Many blessings.... Pat
even in a crowd we are all alone..very true