Love on the Rocks
Inward.
The floods of salty stress
whirlpool themselves
into lonliness,
which submerges me.
Outward.
The pantomime carries on
role-modeling you
as a paragon,
which amuses me.
heterodynemind
Nobody can write about our inner worlds with quite the finesse that Fay does.
Nobody can write about our inner worlds with quite the finesse that Fay does.
Ernestine Northover
Two sides of the coin. Sad and happy rolled into one super poem.
Two sides of the coin. Sad and happy rolled into one super poem.
Karin Anderson
Deep and so meaningful Fay inward and outward saying so much within your poem. You are one talented writer!
Deep and so meaningful Fay inward and outward saying so much within your poem. You are one talented writer!
T A Ramesh
Compelling passion how should it be is well expressed so briefly!
Compelling passion how should it be is well expressed so briefly!
carol
short but so effective like this one
short but so effective like this one
Pendemic
What a trip you took me on! The few words saying so much. The feeling and emotion captured is amazing.
What a trip you took me on! The few words saying so much. The feeling and emotion captured is amazing.
Two sides, but both are melancholic, for different reasons. To say so much, with so few words; as you know, is a talent...