Almost Love
Almost love was born.
A long time ago.
Thought I saw
a twinkle of love.
In the eyes of youth.
Seems like yesterday.
We were in love.
Turning around
it dies in the memories.
Inside my mind
it thrives.
Seeing you so clear.
In the wall of memories.
My heart sighs.
Brushing a faded tear
aside.
Almost love flew away
in tears.
As years passed.
My heart sighs.
As your face fades
away in the memories of my mind.
Slowly turning around
to say goodbye.
Almost love
fades away in time.
By Weeping willow
(c)2011
Simply Bono Razek
this write ..my heart wears-for thats how I feel.....like your closing verse a lot........
this write ..my heart wears-for thats how I feel.....like your closing verse a lot........
lynnbglover
Heartbreaking write about a lost almost love. Great Job.
Heartbreaking write about a lost almost love. Great Job.
heather wilkins
almost love, just not quite. Maybe infatuation. great write.
almost love, just not quite. Maybe infatuation. great write.
Mark L. Berryann
So true. Even if we are trying to hang on inside. I enjoyed this.
So true. Even if we are trying to hang on inside. I enjoyed this.
Ralph L. Jones Jr.
"Almost love" is a great term for a lot of relationships. There isn't any word that I know of that describes a relationship that is missing maybe a small catalyst to get to the level we want.
"Almost love" is a great term for a lot of relationships. There isn't any word that I know of that describes a relationship that is missing maybe a small catalyst to get to the level we want.
I came back for a 2nd reading of this tender poem..I favor your 2nd verse's last 2 lines alot...beautiful even though sad..