Wildflowers

the fields fly by
on both sides--
a blur of daisies, dandelions, and
lots of other
wildflowers i don't know
but they're beautiful,
surrounding...
as i run through
this canvas of summer

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Jay
love the last two lines, and the first two, pretty much all of it :)
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Ben Gieske
With it being winter this is a wondrous sight and feeling you convey. "This canvas of summer" - you paint a beautiful pciture.
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Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Wild flowers whispering love songs... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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Ben Gieske
Nothing more wonderful. I like your ending.
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Elena S
Aww!! Summer and wildflowers!! What a beautiful canvas to joy for the winter's fast approaching and all those lovely colours I shall find only in some warm sweater or the beautiful flowing of cheltee2tan, the lovely poet and painter !Thank you.
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James T. Adair
I like seeing wildflowers too. I miss them now that Winter is almost here. Your flannel shirt and jeans are a giveaway that you like the outdoors. Nice!
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heather wilkins
nice field of wildflowers. nice poem
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