Mirror Cameo Poem
Through The Window
Through the
glass I see the boy.
I wonder if he remembers
me like I
remember him. He holds my gaze
now but dropped my heart long
ago...
It's her.
She sees me through the window!
Her sad eyes remind me of the
time I made
her cry. She fell in love, I fell
in lust. I'll never
forget...
t.ravindran.
this poem is very different and effective. it says many things like a bombshell.the last three lines makes all the difference. "her cry. She fell in love, I fell in lust. I'll never forget.." sure one can not forget. ravi
this poem is very different and effective. it says many things like a bombshell.the last three lines makes all the difference. "her cry. She fell in love, I fell in lust. I'll never forget.." sure one can not forget. ravi
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
How I love this look through the window...deeply beautiful! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
How I love this look through the window...deeply beautiful! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Maggie
Violet I've never written this way and I really enjoyed it, I don't think it would have worked any other way, lovely piece
Violet I've never written this way and I really enjoyed it, I don't think it would have worked any other way, lovely piece
iverhyck
Nice work. He... mirror, I look in it only while shaving. Perhaps after reading this I will more often.
Nice work. He... mirror, I look in it only while shaving. Perhaps after reading this I will more often.
Pendemic
Violet you have captured both perspectives well in this challenging style of poetry. You have wowed me again!
Violet you have captured both perspectives well in this challenging style of poetry. You have wowed me again!
Carl Harris
A most wonderfully writen mirror Cameo poem, Violet, one that's quite expressive in virtually every line. As you probably know, the Cameo is one of my favorite poetic forms and I always enjoy reading a well expressed one like this this outstanding poem. Carl.
A most wonderfully writen mirror Cameo poem, Violet, one that's quite expressive in virtually every line. As you probably know, the Cameo is one of my favorite poetic forms and I always enjoy reading a well expressed one like this this outstanding poem. Carl.
Violet Valkyrie
Sadly Vincent your syllable counting and knowledge of Cameo poetry has less potential... The lines are like that on purpose as it is a CAMEO poem. Thus has a specific syllable count: 2 5 8 3 8 7 2. not to mention creative licence... regards Violet
Sadly Vincent your syllable counting and knowledge of Cameo poetry has less potential... The lines are like that on purpose as it is a CAMEO poem. Thus has a specific syllable count: 2 5 8 3 8 7 2. not to mention creative licence... regards Violet
Vincent Turner
This is not too bad, however you strange usage of line breaks confused my reading of this poem. For Example I wonder if he remembers me like I remember him. He holds my gaze. for me it reads better like this I wonder if her remembers me like i rememer him. He holds my gaze now but dropped my heart long ago. this poem has potential regards Vincent
This is not too bad, however you strange usage of line breaks confused my reading of this poem. For Example I wonder if he remembers me like I remember him. He holds my gaze. for me it reads better like this I wonder if her remembers me like i rememer him. He holds my gaze now but dropped my heart long ago. this poem has potential regards Vincent
Sandra Martyres
You show both sides of the coin so adeptly in this very well crafted mirror Cameo poem
You show both sides of the coin so adeptly in this very well crafted mirror Cameo poem
Sandra Dodd
Voilet what girl would nt read this and think been there dont that! HOW CLEAVERLY YOU CATCH THE MOMENT WITH YOUR CRAFTED WORDS how smart to show both perspectives Great poem!!
Voilet what girl would nt read this and think been there dont that! HOW CLEAVERLY YOU CATCH THE MOMENT WITH YOUR CRAFTED WORDS how smart to show both perspectives Great poem!!
very beautiful