Nature 1
Small stream in the woods
Wild flowers wondrously sway
Birds chirp, leaves fall down
By. D.C.D dated 01.11.2011
robyn selters
lovely... really quite delightful
lovely... really quite delightful
Desiree
thanks Sir Carl, truthfully i did not notice it..thank u once again for always being a mentor...
thanks Sir Carl, truthfully i did not notice it..thank u once again for always being a mentor...
Carl Harris
This is a fine haiku in the proper tradition, Desiree, though the first line has only four syllable instead of five. That can easily be remedied with the addition of Small to the first line, making it read: Small stream in the woods. You haiku's content is beautiful and sparkles with your excellent imagery. Carl.
This is a fine haiku in the proper tradition, Desiree, though the first line has only four syllable instead of five. That can easily be remedied with the addition of Small to the first line, making it read: Small stream in the woods. You haiku's content is beautiful and sparkles with your excellent imagery. Carl.
this is beautiful.I can feel the nature here