You (Three Waltz Wave Poems)

You

in Spring

song

melt me.

Buttercup

gold seeps

skin

to soul.

I run free

my hair streaming

scent's fluent

bluebell

drifts

of love

chiming wild

wind wafts.

You

dance me

home.

~~~~~~~~~

Each

night you

pour

gloss on

my necklace

of stars.

Spheres

swell and

spill silver

stardust as dusk's

silk billows.

Your hot

breath

blows me

as flute's love.

Eye lids

whoosh

flutter

waltz~

~~~~~~~~~


You

balance

the

star strung

necklace to

slide on

breast's

milky

way crease, I

fall in you and

out, arms reach

love's ache

'till

necklace

snaps, shimmies

rolls and

spins

with our

thrills~





Karin Anderson © 2011
All Rights Reserved


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Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
No one does it better...So absolutely beautiful! Dorothy Singing Still

LightH2O
Imagery, sounds and words that make my spirit dance, a truly great inspiring piece.

Munia Khan
Wow! wow and wow ! This is more than just brilliant Karin.I specially love the way of his pouring gloss on your necklace of stars each night.A milky way of a verse this work really is ! Absolutely wonderful.

Marie
Wow! Breathtakingly beautiful, Karin, this gorgeous gem sparkles with passion and love, so tenderly written and sweetly expressed, through excellent word choice and stunning visual detail. In perfect rhythm and rhyme the words dance around in my mind as I read, soooooo beautiful! I have so enjoyed reading, Karin. Thank you for sharing. God bless you always.....

Jenny Gordon
What a tribute to passionate love! Poignantly yet subtly evocative of heady desire and satisfaction, tinged erotic, almost lilting in a breath-taking zephyr whispering wonderment. Awesome.

mamta agarwal
it's an achingly beautiful poem Karin; somehow to me it is more a complete meeting of soulmates, and as Shywolf says it waltzes straight into my soul, such is imagery you weave with words. I have read it three times over, and am soaking it in.

PrEmJi PrEmJi
so beautiful...

rema renjini nair
karin that was like floating among the stars what a star of a poem

robyn selters
Wow! Karin, this is a simmering, shining poem that dances through the phases of closeness... superb

Andrew Blakemore
A lovely, rhythmical piece Karin, excellent as always.

sarwar chowdhury
wonderful wording indeed!

Ernestine Northover
A beautifully embroidered piece of writing and the music perfectly went with the words. A true delight.

Susan Jarvis
Your words drip down the page like honey, and the waltz wave form embraces the sentiment of this graceful, sensual and beautiful trio just perfectly. Poetic seduction at its finest. :)

T A Ramesh
Sensuous romance absorbs heart indeed!

carol
this has everything karin love beauty sensuously worded

Kesav V Easwaran
Beautiful poem, Karin...passion romance allegory and imagination- all these get combined gloriously in your lines...liked

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
So beautiful Karin...touches the heart, teases the senses! You are a wonderful poet and when I grow up I hope to spin words like you to make the world smile and sing. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Meggie Gultiano
i feel like dancing reading here with the love of my life..I echo what Maggie wrote here..An exceptional write.Amazing is the word!!!

magnolia
Wonderful Karin. I love the pouring of gloss on a necklace of stars, beautiful words..Maggie

Lynda Robson
A well penned beautiful dance of a piece, thank you Karin

Sandra Martyres
This piece waltzes off the page wonderfully- all the ingredients of a great write Karin - original and sensual woven into an exquisite form.

tom balch
Beautifully penned and wonderful use of form, Karin.

Gita Ashok
Stunningly beautiful imagery, wonderfully sensual inking and serene music and lovely images to complement the waltz wave poems. This is simply amazing, Karin.

Shakespeares Waste Bin
Dances the page divinely Karin