The Height of Loss

The silence engulfs me
And I welcome it with heart...
The voices are no more...

The light enters inside me,
And I'm left in the dark...
The accusations don't glare...

The touches miss me
And I'm left with numbness...
Sensations die a pathetic death...

The taste of your mouth
Is forgotten, not because
There is no kiss, but no me......

♥ s.r. ♥
October 28th, 2011

Just a scrawl of crude thoughts, nothing personal. :)

Kesav V Easwaran
Nice write on the chosen theme, Sana...the concluding stanza is much expressive

Ravi Sathasivam
Well composed poem. Very beautiful. Enjoyed reading it. tfs

robyn selters
Wow! This really packs a punch... wonderfully evocative, atmospheric poem... Hope all is well, dear Sana...

Karin Anderson
I can also relate to this as the other poets comment as life can have ups and downs with emotive loss. The height of up and the down of low is well expressed with poem and image Sana~

Negative_TheFallen
Left alone.. a bitter feeling.. I can relate to this pretty much..

Fay Slimm
I admire that last phrase Sana - -- "there is a kiss but no me" echoes the wistfulness of the whole well-written verse.

Sandra Martyres
Nicely composed Sana...

Debs
Very very nice Sana, I could relate to this poem too.