Reach Across The Tracks...

Reach for me, reach across,
Reach across the diverging tracks,
The diverging tracks to loss...

Tracks to loss, let's unite,
Let's unite across the differences,
The differences for which we fight...

We fight, for the sake of the journey
The journey to an endless abyss,
The endless abyss of true love...

(c) Sana Rose 2011
- October 30th, 2011

P.S. An on the spot write right now.

Shihab
Image and expressions lent artistic illusions of united differences.

Ken e Hall
Originality at its best best way to travel...true love ...regards

Kesav V Easwaran
Well written piece...the tercets and the repeating phrases add to the beauty of this write

Botan
Great poems

robyn selters
wonderful poem... succinct and powerful... you wrote this with much skill and impact

Patrick McFarland
Nine terrific lines Sana. I believe the final three are particularly good and wrap this piece up nicely.

Ravi Sathasivam
Nice write. Beautiful. tfs

Ency Bearis
Lovely write, great poem.

Karin Anderson
Great theme about the difference in love written with heartfelt flair. There is much wisdom in these positive lines Sana~

Fay Slimm
Differences to be overcome by reaching across tracks in true love is so well brought out in this appealing verse Sana.

Gita Ashok
Great theme, lovely image and a beautiful last stanza.

Meggie Gultiano
on the spot beautiful lines, sis

C. P. Sharma
Perhaps Kipling was wrong, East and West do meet..., love makes them meet.

Sandra Martyres
Great on the spot write Sana...a lovely poem