Puente 1: snow erases

all scents
from icy air
but for pine and smoke

~snow erases~

all hues
from a landscape
but one cardinal...

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Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Delightful versing...Love both! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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york2frisco
Sole survivors of these senses stand familiar to your beckon ... evoking memories and more. This form is interesting and you've used it well.
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Susan Jarvis
A poetic treat for the senses... A splash of red on a backdrop of winter white... And that smell of pine and smoke. This puts me in mind of William Carlos Williams. Simply beautiful.
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