Sunset Minute
The sun moves down towards its bed
in glowing red
and orange hues.
It cannot choose
the pace of its descent. Its fire
might well inspire
a lengthier rhyme
if, taking time,
it slowed its journey through the sky
and such as I
could ramble on.
But now its gone.
Liliana Negoi
came and gone...what is a minute after all than a blink of the eye of time? :)
came and gone...what is a minute after all than a blink of the eye of time? :)
yelena
there's such a special charm in minute poems. enjoyed this one so much. thanks for sharing, Paul. :)
there's such a special charm in minute poems. enjoyed this one so much. thanks for sharing, Paul. :)
Fay Slimm
Love it - - love it. And as from now we have a new format for this site Paul - but so far without either Bookmark or room for an intro. - -Also we are not being informed as yet by an email as to whom has commented or messaged us - - ugh !!! Even now I am still looking how I can message a poet when I wish to - - crazy days at the moment. - - I was so glad to read your beautifully calm minute poem - feel better already. x Fay
Love it - - love it. And as from now we have a new format for this site Paul - but so far without either Bookmark or room for an intro. - -Also we are not being informed as yet by an email as to whom has commented or messaged us - - ugh !!! Even now I am still looking how I can message a poet when I wish to - - crazy days at the moment. - - I was so glad to read your beautifully calm minute poem - feel better already. x Fay
tom balch
This seasonl minute series is a joy to read, Paul. Must try one.
This seasonl minute series is a joy to read, Paul. Must try one.
Sandra Martyres
OOps I meant new..not never
OOps I meant new..not never
Sandra Martyres
Yes it has....I leave you to discover the never Avatar...Nice minute poem...
Yes it has....I leave you to discover the never Avatar...Nice minute poem...
erik99
Has PF really changed its format? I can't find the place to write an intro. This one (not being about autumn) is not a competition entry.
Has PF really changed its format? I can't find the place to write an intro. This one (not being about autumn) is not a competition entry.
Such true write, it's gone!, but left us a vivid impression with your words. Well done!