***Autumn Minute Poem***
Marmalade jam on finger tips
she slips zest’s strips
of orange gown
past naval down
To her melodic Autumn toes;
unpicks and throws
leaves on stage light’s
you-can-dance night.
Dancer’s leaps catch sunset’s parade,
notes serenade
as goodwill spills
spins and wins thrills!
Karin Anderson © 2011
Photo by lestrim rose at flick'r
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Delicious fleck of artistic imagescaping, young lassie...You spin & spill your caraf of kaleidoscopic majique with unparalleled poetic dexterity! And you know what,Karin? I like it too! ~FjR~
Delicious fleck of artistic imagescaping, young lassie...You spin & spill your caraf of kaleidoscopic majique with unparalleled poetic dexterity! And you know what,Karin? I like it too! ~FjR~
Shriram Sivaramakrishnan
lovely!!! bookmarked...
lovely!!! bookmarked...
Marie
Reading this excellently crafted poem made my heart dance as I read, Karin. A very romantic poem, passionately expressed in delectable detail. Wonderful visual detail in each line, complimented by your excellent choice of artwork. A delightful poem, Karin, which I have so enjoyed reading. Thank you for your very kind comment and for your most kind words of welcome. Blessings always....
Reading this excellently crafted poem made my heart dance as I read, Karin. A very romantic poem, passionately expressed in delectable detail. Wonderful visual detail in each line, complimented by your excellent choice of artwork. A delightful poem, Karin, which I have so enjoyed reading. Thank you for your very kind comment and for your most kind words of welcome. Blessings always....
yelena
'Dancer’s leaps catch sunset’s parade..' - what an epic autumnal dance it should be. heavenly beautiful your words are.
'Dancer’s leaps catch sunset’s parade..' - what an epic autumnal dance it should be. heavenly beautiful your words are.
Munia Khan
This is simply mesmeric Karin.I love the way you started this awesome piece with a yummy line.A very wonderful minute poem.Loved it so much.Thumbs up!
This is simply mesmeric Karin.I love the way you started this awesome piece with a yummy line.A very wonderful minute poem.Loved it so much.Thumbs up!
magnolia
A passionate piece Karin,am licking my fingers ! Maggie
A passionate piece Karin,am licking my fingers ! Maggie
La Finita
A Magic Autumn indeed! Romantic and lovely.xxxx Laura
A Magic Autumn indeed! Romantic and lovely.xxxx Laura
Meggie Gultiano
this is great..with your marmalade jam, sunset's parade...etc..
this is great..with your marmalade jam, sunset's parade...etc..
heather wilkins
great write Karin.
great write Karin.
MoonLi
Passion filled .... romantic!!
Passion filled .... romantic!!
narain, jay p.
great autumn poem twist.
great autumn poem twist.
Jenny Gordon
Whoa! Awesome passionate and romantic tribute to Autumn in this beautiful little form. Wonderful imagery conveying the nigh erotic experience.
Whoa! Awesome passionate and romantic tribute to Autumn in this beautiful little form. Wonderful imagery conveying the nigh erotic experience.
tom balch
Wow! Karin, a wonderful autumn write indeed, loved it.
Wow! Karin, a wonderful autumn write indeed, loved it.
Kesav V Easwaran
Autumn on a poetic dance...well written piece, Karin...beautiful entry
Autumn on a poetic dance...well written piece, Karin...beautiful entry
mamta agarwal
your poem tickles all the senses Karin, from marmalade jam to sunset's parade, it's teasing, exciting and enticing. beautifully captured seson of autumn !
your poem tickles all the senses Karin, from marmalade jam to sunset's parade, it's teasing, exciting and enticing. beautifully captured seson of autumn !
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Oh, how lovely is this verse Karin...You have made my heart sing as it dances to the music of this poem. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Oh, how lovely is this verse Karin...You have made my heart sing as it dances to the music of this poem. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
RAJ NANDY
A thrilling and exciting poem Karin ! Also thanks for making time to read my Story of English Language in verse ! Never thought it would get over 30 comments ! Best wishes & God bless , - Raj
A thrilling and exciting poem Karin ! Also thanks for making time to read my Story of English Language in verse ! Never thought it would get over 30 comments ! Best wishes & God bless , - Raj
John X. McCullagh
You are definitely the leader in the clubhouse with this effort.
You are definitely the leader in the clubhouse with this effort.
carol
awesome karin fascinating write
awesome karin fascinating write
samanyan
LOVELY FORMAT AND AN ELEGANT WRITE
LOVELY FORMAT AND AN ELEGANT WRITE
Sandra Martyres
Wow Karin this is original...marmalade jam, sunsert's parade and melodic autumn toes...it does not get better than this...Good luck
Wow Karin this is original...marmalade jam, sunsert's parade and melodic autumn toes...it does not get better than this...Good luck
Excellent and fascinating karin.