Wintry Moods
Rainy sky looks almost drained,
No more tears to drop
Thunder looking dark faced sore,
Ponders over roars
Slipping out in silent haste,
Moody clouds depart
Brooding over sun titters
Dares to look out not
Wet leaves send out water sighs,
Long time they held on
Droop down yawning aging trees
Young birds watch out close
Bitter words heard, uttered harsh?
Wear a face disguised!
Sport a cheeky brought out smile-
Won’t last wintry days
Warming season- spring, a song-
Life could indeed face
~Kesav Venkat Easwaran~
December-6- 2011
Image courtesy
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Indira Renganathan
ring out the old-ring in the new...this sounds such welcomming the new year...though it means the seasonal change....marvelous descriptions....wonderful Kesav
ring out the old-ring in the new...this sounds such welcomming the new year...though it means the seasonal change....marvelous descriptions....wonderful Kesav
Jenny Gordon
Fun, laden with delightful imagery. Excellent metaphors. Beautiful, thought-provoking, and a pleasure to read.
Fun, laden with delightful imagery. Excellent metaphors. Beautiful, thought-provoking, and a pleasure to read.
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Lovely versing, as always! Dorothy Singing Still
Lovely versing, as always! Dorothy Singing Still
Bob Blackwell
Both the winter storms and the bitter faces change given time. A wise write as usual Kesav. Thank you
Both the winter storms and the bitter faces change given time. A wise write as usual Kesav. Thank you
Ken e Hall
You express the seasons eloquently moody clouds and droopy trees, then spring warming season. The summer season give me any-time Kev ...regards
You express the seasons eloquently moody clouds and droopy trees, then spring warming season. The summer season give me any-time Kev ...regards
magnolia
Oh, I love this Kesav.Everyone has said it more eloquently than I could and I second all comments. Great write :)
Oh, I love this Kesav.Everyone has said it more eloquently than I could and I second all comments. Great write :)
samanyan
true...a beautiful blend of the changing weather and human moods..lovely
true...a beautiful blend of the changing weather and human moods..lovely
Sandra Martyres
You capture the changing winter moods effEctively in this terrific write Kesav
You capture the changing winter moods effEctively in this terrific write Kesav
Ency Bearis
A lovely descriptive write, well penned emotion
A lovely descriptive write, well penned emotion
Karin Anderson
A beautiful descriptive write on the moods of winter, to the warmth of a new season to bring in hope. The line I really liked is "wet leaves send out water sighs".
A beautiful descriptive write on the moods of winter, to the warmth of a new season to bring in hope. The line I really liked is "wet leaves send out water sighs".
Raj Arumugam
Gita expresses your poem's achievement so clearly. I second her appreciation of your poem.
Gita expresses your poem's achievement so clearly. I second her appreciation of your poem.
PrEmJi PrEmJi
nothing is permanent except change!
nothing is permanent except change!
Gita Ashok
A beautiful blending of winter's images and human moods in this wonderfully inked verse. The last two lines are truly showstoppers.
A beautiful blending of winter's images and human moods in this wonderfully inked verse. The last two lines are truly showstoppers.
mamta agarwal
wonderful images Kesav; nothing lasts, even the sting of harsh words, in time one rises above it. it reminds me- if winter comes can spring be behind... However each season brings new perceptions and insights, which you have with such ease woven in. a lovely poem rich in imagery and a message of hope
wonderful images Kesav; nothing lasts, even the sting of harsh words, in time one rises above it. it reminds me- if winter comes can spring be behind... However each season brings new perceptions and insights, which you have with such ease woven in. a lovely poem rich in imagery and a message of hope
Nilotpal Sarmah
One of the finest poetic language I've read so far. From the first two beautiful lines to the brilliant last line, it provided a fine read.
One of the finest poetic language I've read so far. From the first two beautiful lines to the brilliant last line, it provided a fine read.
Anu a
beautifully crafted..nice poem!!!
beautifully crafted..nice poem!!!
patspoems
Absolutely beautifully worded with lovely imagery.... Pat
Absolutely beautifully worded with lovely imagery.... Pat
Lynda Robson
beautifully crafted, wonderful words Kesav
beautifully crafted, wonderful words Kesav
LightH2O
I'm waiting for those warming seasons, but meanwhile I'm enjoying this nice poem and missing my sleep...but I'll get some zzz's eventually...lol
I'm waiting for those warming seasons, but meanwhile I'm enjoying this nice poem and missing my sleep...but I'll get some zzz's eventually...lol
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
"Wet leaves send out water sighs..."...Stunning line that I wish I could claim as mine....Stellar crafting, Kesav....as always ! ~FjR~
"Wet leaves send out water sighs..."...Stunning line that I wish I could claim as mine....Stellar crafting, Kesav....as always ! ~FjR~
Rahul Aithal
Emotions mixed with nature quite beautifully, Kesav. "Wet leaves send out water sighs, Long time they held on "....Nicely put.
Emotions mixed with nature quite beautifully, Kesav. "Wet leaves send out water sighs, Long time they held on "....Nicely put.
Finely crafted.