A story dedicated to Nimal...

Jesus/Buddha by debtoyou

AKELDAMA (SHORT STORY)

Gautama Buddha stood near the dead-body of Judas Iscariot. Hot blood was still gushing out from his broken skull. The potter’s field remained as a red painting made of blood and his bowels gushed out looked like mating pythons.

‘One-day, this place will be known as ‘the field of blood’; Gautama told himself and sank into deep meditation. When he opened his eyes, Jesus was sitting beside him with tears...

‘Why do you cry?’

‘Sacrifice recognizes sacrifice…’

Gautama smiled and that smile got transferred to Jesus also, for true smile is made of sacrifice!

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Chaos1214
I feel it. Making it through the gauntlet is its own reward.
 
seema chowdhury
Thanks for sharing .very nice and creative.
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Ron Peat
This line is just fantastic: (for a true smile is made of sacrifice!). Thanx for sharing that thought. A poet friend..RH Peat
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Angelina Pandian
I have nothing to argue here Premji! So wonderfully written that I am able to reach its underlying deeper levels as I read!
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nimal dunuhinga
O Great! Gautama & Jesus are true Comrades..............! Gautama found nirvana and judas betrayed Jesus. We still crawl on this fruitless Earth? My humble regards to your kind dedication! You're not only a bard and a good painter too.
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Fay Slimm
A very wise saying which you express with just the right length of line Prem. The message sinks in as the mind understands the need for tears. An admirable verse.
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Kesav V Easwaran
That's a great expression Premji...deep insightful and creative work
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RAJ NANDY
True ! Also irrespective of the paths we follow , all paths lead to HIM is also true ! But there is one exception , ie the godless path of the fanatics & the terrorists ! Thanks for sharing , -Raj
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