Just catching fun tonight.

A box of crayons

Life is like a box of crayons.
Bookmark this, but don't get it dog-eared.
Heart as light as hydrogen ions.
No bookmarks, just what I feared!

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Nyasha Tafaune
WOW!!!!!!! just WOW!!!!! if i say too much ill spoil the compliment hehe ......
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Cat
lovely colors.. Cat
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mamta agarwal
well said, nice perspective- colourful life
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yelena
a super smart poem :)
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Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
None more clever than you dear poet! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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Jenny Gordon
Bookmarked so that little me could finally discover and fall in love with this delightful, beautiful, exceptional quatrain so laden with significance and yet so short and sweet! Wonderful1 La, but I wish I could recommend and bookmark it myself! Excellent, to say the least!
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Marie
A delightful, fun write, very nicely crafted. I love the use of Simile and the comparison between life and a box of crayons. Penned with talent, a succinct poetic gem! Thank you for sharing Kendzi. Blessings...
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marvinbrato
Well-penned , short but profound sentiments!
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Ben Gieske
Nicely crayoned. I was just reading that sodium ions when exited by electricity give off a yellow color and oxygen ions, red and green colors. I was wondering what color the hydrogen ions give off or would they blow up.
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poeticpiers reborn again
brief but perfectly formed
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RAJ NANDY
Behind this short humorous poem , meaning of Life is hidden ! Thanks friend for patiently reading my Story of English Language ! Google has kindly reflected this poem on their permanent web reference page ! I found out by typing the title on Googles Search today ! Thanks & best wishes , -Raj
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La Finita
Love fun poems! Well done
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Elena S
Hahahha here you, to prove your fears wrong: A poem wrote while having fun, that's what I love and need the most!
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LightH2O
LOL...very clever!
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Chaos1214
Ha ha... Now you're seeing the light, brother : D
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Sylvia Frances Chan
Nice box of crayons, Kendzi! I love the soft painting!
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kath
For you Kendzi - bookmarked! Gotcha! lol :) kath xxx
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Botan
Heart as light as hydrogen ions great Kendzi, nice box of crayons too:)
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heather wilkins
nice box of crayons.
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stevenstirk
Fun makes the whole world turn . Great fun Kendzi.
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Ata
however a fun ,this line that life is like a box of crayons is so true ,tfs
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nimal dunuhinga
A fine pastel drawing!
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