Picture is by Dave Roberts

~ come with me ~~

come with me
and float awhile
through silky stream
and molten dream

together we
can find our way
a soulful tune
with silv'ry moon

your innocence
surrounds my soul
like perfumed air
I do declare

i'll never leave
unless you say
and we can play
if you will stay

sensebreeze
Innocent love...

Yacov Mitchenko
Quite delicate and romantic, a la Byron. Actually, Verlaine is closer to the mark, when translated.

Raj Arumugam
beautiful, lyrical and very inviting, Robyn...smooth and very lyrical lines

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Serene melody of love...wonderful! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Ken e Hall
Wonderful words a pleasure to read...Birds of a feather stick together...regards

Elena S
Beautiful! It gives a happy mood to any soul, thank you for share.

j_kool
Very nice poem, my friend.

Adwin Singson
No i won't...'coz when i stay, people leave me :( But this poem you wrote is so beautiful :) Tank U

heterodynemind
This flows along so smoothly I barely notice where I am going. A completely peaceful, whimsical journey to refresh the soul. ;)

Dagim
Beautiful as it can be.

spysgrandson
soothing simplicity

patspoems
Absolutely beautiful Robyn and the picture you chose was perfect......... Pat

Karin Anderson
It does flow like a song and the words are smooth and special. It is elegant and "silv'ry moon" really spoke to me~

LightH2O
Beautiful write with such an inspiring picture.

Kesav V Easwaran
That's a nice sincere loving invite one cannot deny...beautiful write, Robyn

JustStella
Wonderfully romantic. I love the picture, how fitting!

michael burke
Simply beautiful.

nimal dunuhinga
I love the Swans and this love song Your deep voice touches the soul!

heather wilkins
nice one . it does sing.

Simply Bono Razek
sings just like a beautiful love song !

La Finita
Few words, so well penned. Beautiful!

Lynda Robson
Beautiful Robyn

Susan Jarvis
A graceful, lyrical and beautiful poem that drips down the page like sweet honey. Just lovely. :)