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Whenever I pass through the broken fort and the fragmented gateways with Persian scripts and their shadows lingering on the rocky highway..I stop and can view ages ago it is here that the Emperor walked along with his courtiers some of whom carried measure ropes to measure the distance covered..some carried sand glass to calculate hours..I walked on again..as a Wanderer..

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riverdove
Dear Subhadip, this is a beautiful piece however...I would change this line... I stop always as I can view ages ago it is here that the Emperor walked along with his courtiers some of whom carried measure ropes to measure the distance...to read this way...I stop and view and it is here that ages ago the Emperor walked with his courtiers...and also Subhadip san should be sand. Other than this I think this piece of writing is awesome! :) Rita Kay Webb
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RAJ NANDY
Nice thoughts in verse friend ! Correction ; 'Sand glass".
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