Confused

a mannequin in rain 
 running down it's memory lane  
perplexed with it's primitive pain
convincing itself
that tears fall from the sky, 
failing to notice it in it's eye
as it watches the people,
move in perplexity,
wonders how it feels...

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03October2011

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indira
investing mannequin with memory and tears and primitive pain...amazing!
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sathyanarayana
The surrealism in this poem really perplexes one...a toy's primitive pain and memory lane real conundrums......this chubby boy himself is a handsome puzzle
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indira
i can't think of such lines myself!
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indira
i can't think of such lines myself!
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