Kiss Curls (A Cascade Poem)
(Dedicated To My Hairdresser)
The mirror’s mist of beau’s rose in her hair.
The wait and longing date to make kiss curls.
The peak and fall of ripple’s dream cascades.
The hair-breadth to a flowing-next-do date~
The reach of waiting arms to roll love whorls.
The trickles down the neck of throaty trust.
The soak of perm’s solution to sate dreams.
The mirror’s mist of beau’s rose in her hair~
The breathless golden pause to test the silk.
The rush of hotter air on body waves.
The shift of teasing teeth of ivory pearl.
The wait and longing date to make kiss curls~
The veil of liquid gloss to hold the dream.
The new lipstick’s red-puckered-pleased-lip pout.
The drool of swirling bliss and thrilling waves.
The peak and fall of ripple’s dream cascades~
The bedtime’s pillow fluff of coiffure clouds.
The midnight spell of silver’s waterfall.
The cheer and sheer rapture of wash and wear.
The hair’s-breadth to the flowing next-do date~
Karin Anderson © 2011
All Rights Reserved
Video Bridal Falls by Nicholas Gunn
The mesmeric exuberance of this poem charms the reader and almost takes him to another fascinating fantasy land. I think this is one of the most beautiful creations you have ever composed. loved it, it is amazing how you never fail to amaze the reader with your great writing style..
A breathtakingly beautiful poem, which flows in liquid syllables from your skilled pen, so smoothly. Ethereal beauty so refined in the wonderful imagery of each line. Exquisite penning, Karin. I have so enjoyed reading. Thank you for kindly sharing. Blessings always.....
Like the cascade of the waterfall it flows, a clever style but also a lovely poem
beautiful. I think I want to try this form. thank you lady Karin.
I try to touch the veil of liquid gloss to hold the dream Karin, so that I may feel the purity within this mesmeric verse.A brilliant work in one word that deserves a million reads..Simply awesome.Thanks for this gem Karin.
very beautiful...like a river that flows, your words are magical!!
Poetic technique followed so keenly that it is really having cascade effect of kiss as the video music and scene depict well!
how exquisite is this poem with the superb video too... one is transported to another era where femininity blossomed amidst kiss curls and silk... a lovely flowing cascade... beautiful, Karin
This is such a beautiful write and the music is so relaxing.
Enrapturing, tinged erotic, breathtaking and superb! La, but this is a marvel of an experience in dreamy romance, mingling throughout those fabled chains of ensnaring curls that have entangled many a wand'ring laddie of yore. Impressive and awesome! Wonderful!
a total breath-taking write Karin..so beautiful..I loved this verse....."The breathless golden pause to test the silk. The rush of hotter air on body waves. The shift of teasing teeth of ivory pearl. The wait and longing date to make kiss curls~...simply awesome ...
The true flow of this dreamy cascade of delightful words could only be written by such as your gifted pen dear friend. Karin you capture it all from the whiff of first "throaty trust" to the finale' of the "next-do date" thrill. Bravo for a wonderful read.
wow bookmarking
A-MA-Zing, Karin. Loved it.
Karin , in this 'cascade poem' I could hear the rhythm , the flow and the music of the waterfall ! The video music was also great ! - Raj
Always Karin you render poetry of joyful form and thoughtful triumphs... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Awesome poem, Karin...the format looks interesting...i think tercets hold equally good, for one can restrict the poem to 12 lines...bookmarked
I'm lost for words - absolutely amazing Karin. The music so serene. Thank you so much...... Pat
The penning is sensational and the audio visual just beautiful! I love the line: "The peak and fall of ripple’s dream cascades"
Another exceptional write Karin....Bookmarked
I am always in awe of your beautiful poetry Karin, this being no exception, bookmarked
great format and remarkable poem you presented Karin
Reading this poem is akin to riding on a cloud nine of love and falling down as raindrops to create the midnight spell of silver's waterfall...magical ...regards