Not so distant...yet far away ...

Memories

Between the pages
I could almost touch the sea
her spray
her mist
and her waves

I almost kissed he two
pairs of feet on her pearly sands

That was the day
I discovered the magic in your fingertips
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That was the day I was born ~

Leonard Dabydeen
This poem is full of emotional freshness and deep, inner recollection...' That was the day ' . Beautiful.

William Bonilla
Well penned romantically beautiful.....Love & Peace Be With You.....William

Andrew Blakemore
I really enjoyed this poem, the final line says so much. Excellent.

Rahul Aithal
Very nice, Sri.

 

seema chowdhury
Nostalgic but alive with sweet memories........

heather wilkins
her spray her mist and her waves I discovered the magic in your fingertips. sweet.

Sandra Martyres
just beautiful Sri...

MoonLi
Sweet smell of the day! Nostalgic!!

Nikunj
Soft , romantic and serene ...a genesis worth the wait

nimal dunuhinga
Memories of pearly sands beautiful and nostalgic too. I hear the inner sea breeze!