It happened to me, broken heart you may have experienced it too, pity it sticks forever.
A broken heart
Many parts to my broken heart
From the day when it fell apart
My whole world came crashing down
And it fell without a sound
All the love that you stole
Left me standing in a hole
From the day my world fell apart
I am standing here with my broken heart
A second that passes feels like an hour
All my emotions have turned sour
Feeling left alone and hollow
My heart has turned to solid stone
Broken heart was the death of me
It's now so simple to see
Isn't better to at least fall
Than never to have loved at all?
By Uzoma
arwritergal
As others have said, yes it does get better. But, I also acknowledge that part of that "getting better" comes from processing the pain. This poem was a part of that process for you, and I would be willing to bet that it will do the same for others. You took me right there to that lowest, most despicable part of pain that leaves you feeling as if breathing takes too much effort. You took me there with you and allowed me to stand with you and to climb up from that dark, lonely place with you. Thank you.
As others have said, yes it does get better. But, I also acknowledge that part of that "getting better" comes from processing the pain. This poem was a part of that process for you, and I would be willing to bet that it will do the same for others. You took me right there to that lowest, most despicable part of pain that leaves you feeling as if breathing takes too much effort. You took me there with you and allowed me to stand with you and to climb up from that dark, lonely place with you. Thank you.
Kendzi
smooth flow of rhyme with a heart touching message! If you are Uzoma, then It's nice to have another Nigerian on the site! Welcome, Nnoo!
smooth flow of rhyme with a heart touching message! If you are Uzoma, then It's nice to have another Nigerian on the site! Welcome, Nnoo!
James T. Adair
I agree...some never heal but blessings occur when you least expect them to. If someone loves you the way you loved previously it will soothe the wounds of love you lost. Those scars will always remain a part of us.
I agree...some never heal but blessings occur when you least expect them to. If someone loves you the way you loved previously it will soothe the wounds of love you lost. Those scars will always remain a part of us.
mvvenkataraman
Your cheerful smile proves, That you are ever jolly, All sorrows God removes, Please pray which is holy.
Your cheerful smile proves, That you are ever jolly, All sorrows God removes, Please pray which is holy.
Chaos1214
A sad song. Let the wounds heal. There'll always be the scars to remind you.
A sad song. Let the wounds heal. There'll always be the scars to remind you.
Nice1 . . . . Very true emotions behind this work . . . . I liked the format and Rhyme . . . . Good Job . . . . :-)