This form is called Octain (Octain Refrain), invented by the great author Luke Prater.The form Structure –
eight lines as two tercets and a couplet, eight syllables per line with the first line repeated (as much as possible) as the last. Meter is iambic or trochaic tetrameter, but fine to just count eight syllables per line for those who prefer that.
Rhyme scheme -
A-b-b
a-c/c-a
b-A
(A = repeated refrain line. c/c refers to line five having mid line (internal) rhyme which is different to the a- and b-rhymes. Any extra mid line rhyme is a bonus)
He ignored his poisoned lifespan
Inviting the vertical glare,
the torments he denied to spare
And towards the unknown he ran.
His dream went blind; love ate his mind.
His fate’s retreat contrived the plan
Moments of scare, he liked to dare
He ignored his poisoned lifespan.
Written on 18th September,2011
©Munia Khan 2011
Well I tried a few of these Munia ...Yes I like this form . Thanks for the introduction . Philip