Poem inspired by this song...the answer to her questions of, "What's going on?"... "(What's Up?)""... the answer is;
"Just Hang On!"

Just Hang On!

I wake up each morning and I start to implore
Realize I'm in this big brotherhood of men
We all call Earth

Some still cry, feel they don't belong
Others just trying to get along
Most hoping to get by

Some of us working to improve our lives
We pray, but still tend to get down
So we ask you, to tend to us
Oh! dear God!... I hear you cry,
Jut hang on!

jadia4708au
Hang on , never loose try to win and always choose it is your turn to look happy this might have been missed by many... hang on.. good piece

Cat
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Don
Well done, Luz. Reminds me of a 70s song, "Hang On! Help is On the Way!" Thanks. Db

stevenstirk
I think many of us just hang on. Even those who profess to be far above that sort of thing. Thought provoking piece.

kah
A positive and lifting poem! Good advice, too :)

Munia Khan
Wise words here Luz.Wonderfully written.Love this finest work.

 

Mark L. Berryann
Interesting perspective.

marvinbrato
Explicit thoughts and profound write! Thanks for sharing

mamta agarwal
Hanging on with grit, only choice! it reminds me of Cycle of life from lion king

nimal dunuhinga
my skeletal soul always hang on.......and thanks for your lovely poem absorbing that song!

Chaos1214
Puts me strongly in mind of Henry David Thoreau’s quote, "The mass of men lead lives of quiet desperation."

Dream Weaver
Great writing inspired by a brilliant song...I love your interprationiofiit:)

Negative_TheFallen
'Hanging on' makes us the member of human club right? Nice work godmama!

Elena S
Great poem and a great song , maybe we need more than hanging on maybe we need a revolution of love. The song made a fusion with your words that is what I see now whole people of the entire earth stand up to hold each other's hand. .Love and Peace.. Thank you dear friend, I know now that all I do is also only hanging on.

carol
hang on solid advice

Botan
Nice poem.

Nilotpal Sarmah
We should hang on through every tough phase. You passed the message through your passion, poetry. A heartfelt piece.

Kesav V Easwaran
Nice message....our duty is to hang on, till end...well written piece

patspoems
Lovely poem I loved the feeling and emotion in your words.... Pat

kirthikayeni
u have seen men beyond their country, caste, religion and creed. u see them as global citizen. we have to just hang on. intriguing write up.

poetwithcancer
"I hear the silence of the stars, / Whose vastly bright and powerful energy of light / Has become cold and powerless, // By the time it touches me." // Lines from one of my poems, still in progress. // Your poem is well written, full of feeling, and sonorous. Yet it makes me feel so sad, somehow. I don't really know why. --Michael