This is a poem I wrote yesterday, on the spot, for my guy. :)
Didn't strike a word, didn't edit anything. Written at a stretch in a few minutes at a sudden whim! :)

A Wait So Beautiful...

My love to you amounts
To heights and depths that no man
Can even begin to seek in this world,
And it's simply grown more than
I can confine inside my heart,
So I'm giving it to you, sweetheart...

Take it gently, dont stop to think,
For if you think, it might make
No sense to your reasons, but truly
It's not something you can foresake,
For then it would be like being blind,
And each other, we would never find...

Even if it's hard to give back,
Just keep it, I shall wait until
That much-longed day when
Me you will slowly fulfill,
As if I were a wish, a dream,
Oh, so beautiful the waitings seem...

-September 16th, 2011
(c) Sana Rose 2011

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robyn selters
A lovely time for you dear Sana... this place where romantic dreams of a special love grow and flourish as that much-longed for day draws closer. Beautiful poem
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Kesav V Easwaran
Beautiful outflow of romantic thoughts, Sana
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Karin Anderson
Superb penning for you treasured fiance Sana and the wait so beautiful is something you will always remember, as this time is so special. I can see it comes straight from you heart and I wish you all the happiness in the world~
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Botan
wonderful poem.
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Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Smooth & polished quilling, Sana....Your love for your guy reaches deep and true....~FjR~
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heather wilkins
Someone is so lucky to have a love such as this offered to them. I hope he reads your pem. lovely.
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Fay Slimm
So tenderly lovely this brought me near tears dear Sana - -wishing all your dreams of love to come true.
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Sandra Martyres
A beautiful piece Sana
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Chaos1214
The courage to hold forth the unedited truth is a victory all by itself. A wonderful exposition.
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