meter is 5/3, 4/4
picture is by merlin flower

~fragrant allure~

her goodness echoes
in my mind

through emer'ld depths
to caverns quiet

fathomless those eyes
waters deep

spilling yearning
never yielding

beckoning glimpses
respite sweet

a nectar pure
fragrant allure

louiville
Wonderful play with words that reminds me of the play of lovers a hint excitement to obtain that allure. Well written from a confident poet!

Jenny Gordon
Intriguing, wonderful couplet tribute to passion and romance? Very lovely with enticing imagery. Scented tantalization indeed. Beautiful.

Ben Gieske
I like this format. Each two lines is a gem.

Elena S
You are holding beauty not only with both of your hands but with your soul too, a most pleasing sense to me you gave many thanks!

Shriram Sivaramakrishnan
seductive! what more can I say?

Bob Blackwell
Is not Jasmine the fragrance of seduction because it is so overpowering. Lovely words Robyn well written

j_kool
Aother classic beautiful poem. Well done, my friend.

LucyJude
So lovely! I totally enjoyed reading this romantic poem. The final stanza is just great!

tom balch
Yes! a beautiful write indeed.

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
So beautiful is this poem robyn...an early morning send off for me. My heart sings the melody of your verse. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Karin Anderson
I loved your Orange Blossom Breeze and now this alluring nectar fragrance to inhale and enjoy. Superb imagery too!

shanmugam
as nice as the picture.

Sandra Martyres
Robyn, the picture adds allure to this alluring and beautifully written piece

Philip
You are so gifted Robyn.Enjoyed your wonderful use of words in poetry.Beautiful verse.

carol
lovely words

Kesav V Easwaran
Beautifully expressed, Robyn

Fay Slimm
Perfectly expressed insideness of fragranced allure Robyn.

Lynda Robson
A beautiful, moving write Robyn

marvinbrato
Succinct romantic expression!