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© RH Peat 5/29/09 12:40pm
form: 3 septets 21 lines
The depth of true passion dwells
beyond all the difficulties;
it holds fast beyond all the trials,
and mistakes of misjudgments.
It abides in a place where trust exists
along side absolute vulnerability.
A place where imagination makes
the unreal real through circumstance.
Silken Sky 2
Silken Sky 2
Let the hawks praise the air
for all its rounded blue.
Beneath winter's moon
any moment can form a kiss.
A trudge through mud
will instruct the ache
to sing a psalm each day.
The unsteady pulse
finds where love hides
its truer shades
in shadowed cloth.
The lake's glass wavers;
its lucidity is lost under
evening's easy breath.
It's the whispered hoots
of owls from darkened corners
that allow lover's to embrace.
Trust quickens the touch as
vulnerability slides beneath
the silk; there the night
sky quilts tangible dreams.
© RH Peat 5/29/09
Beautiful and expressive words, nice imagery depicted for the readers
When we glom onto tangible dreams the continuance of life springs with colors not to be ignored. Your friend in words, Pete
Sensuous with nice vividly soft imagery. I don't really resonate with "whispering hoots of owls from darkened corners" "allowing lover's to embrace", but I do understand that the stimuli for lovemaking come from unconscious sources, and I also understand this is true for most. Nice write!
Tangible, indeed. Your words reach out and touch the reader, opening the mind to the scenes you've laid out for us. Bravo!
Another well composed and a meaningful write. tfs
This keeps me in surprise as you present an imaged thought and then sudderly turn my view to another which has a mystifying link to the preceding.
Whenever I read your poems... I swear I could hear a particular voice recite each words for me from your beautifully written verses. The mystical and admired voice of John B.
great poem a breath taker and yes romantic and thoughtful true love is all about trusting the other person
A lovely poetic piece engaging us in its imagery and delving into its meanings to be enjoyed again and again.
A most amazing write full of imagery and magic.
This is absolute ecstasy, amazing poetry could capture the subtle so beautifully. Hope you are healthy and happy Ron, thanks for such well-crafted creations...
True passion deeply dealt with, transporting imagery with delicate touches from a master craftsman. A lovely poem enjoyed it all through.
Excellent imagery here!
I love the graceful images. Being in love and staying there is a construct of our best wills.
1, a moment and gesture of love and praise ...the acknowledgement of existence is like a quilted dream waiting to blossom in form of rose on time's cheeks . Then the ache knows the path that the master shows. 2. the shadowed cloth of life , the shading skies and the aging skin and heartbeats ...each becomes a pilgrim in search of the nirvana that defines the resonance.... 3. Easy breaths set the times to tango and the lucidity is gone for a moment when the heads toss against the intent of the moment.. 4 trust quickens the touch ...wow is the word for this piece ron
Absolute. A poignant work here. A master at work, for sure.
sky quilts tangible dreams............. this says it all. Simply Beautiful.
love... love only...
Your poem provides wonderful romantic imageries, Ron...the second stanza lines are all the more appealing
A verse lingering, wrapping around my senses. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing