Reflections-7
1 Sun
Stillborn was Dark first
Seven horsed He came to wake
Half done,half undone
2 Sunrise
Red streaked horizon
Concocting ocean water
Day's nature tonic
3 Sunshine
Up the hills piquant
Pinkish rise to breakfast just
Glazed spread in ripples
4 Sunlight
Meridian march
Warm loam welcomes with regards
Puckers but hot land
Nilotpal Sarmah
True reflections of a deep thinking mind. I liked the sunrise segment.
True reflections of a deep thinking mind. I liked the sunrise segment.
seema chowdhury
Lovely as always, they always make the reader think afterwards for a long time.
Lovely as always, they always make the reader think afterwards for a long time.
Kesav V Easwaran
Beautiful 'ku' imageries on the Sunny Side of nature...the one on sunshine is the most i liked
Beautiful 'ku' imageries on the Sunny Side of nature...the one on sunshine is the most i liked
samanyan
lovely senryu's mam....seven horsed he came to wake
lovely senryu's mam....seven horsed he came to wake
A mesmerizing well-crafted write! The third stanza on sunshine has striking imagery.