meter is 5/7/5
picture is by ykarelic

Bee on orange blossom by ykarelic

~ ~ orange blossom breeze ~ ~

air bursting with scent
bees burrow like babes to breast
seeking sweet nectar

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windowguy
Awesome! One of the best haikus i've read in a long time! A Fav. Recommended.
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librarybee
What an amazing simile. Short and sweet
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LightH2O
Lovely metaphor, few words that convey much.
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patspoems
Just beautiful.... Pat
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Pranab k chakraborty
A suckers-day should be announced by the world-authority. at least we can send this piece of poem in attachment... Radiation is much active of these three lines. Marvelous. unique the reciprocate match with the pic.
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Jenny Gordon
Wow! Awesome! Superb! Impressive! Not a word out of place and nigh exquisite in rendering that wonderful reality of pollination and the wondrous pleasures it affords mankind as propagation flourishes. Lovely!
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©Rustart
Wonderful piece of imagery, enhanced by skilful use of alliteration. Quite brilliant!
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Chaos1214
Windchime words condensed to an exquisite core.
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Kesav V Easwaran
Nicely worded short piece, Robyn
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j_kool
Nice Haiku. Very well written.
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Rahul Aithal
Beautifully constructed Haiku, Robyn.
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Munia Khan
A delightful Haiku to celebrate before winter Robyn.Love it so much.
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Sana Rose
Aww... What a sweet simile here, Robyn! It displays a beautiful moment.. A poem photograph indeed! Loved it!
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Bob Blackwell
Our orange tree is full of blossom, the fragrance is intoxicating. A lovely haiku Robyn
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Ken e Hall
Natures cycle the bees have to ride...luvli sweet poem ...regards
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Philip
Wish that we had more Orange Blossom in the U.K ..Robyn. We best settle for a sweet Poem ...being as close as we can get.
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Sandra Martyres
a brilliant haiku Robyn....wonderful to read
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Abhinav Baruah
So Sweet !!
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Negative_TheFallen
Great work!!
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carol
wow fantastic
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Gita Ashok
Brilliant imagery in this heartwarming haiku!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Great haiku. Lovely. tfs
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Karin Anderson
I love the way you have presented the title as I can almost feel the breeze blow. Superb imagery too Robyn~
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Lynda Robson
great imagery, just lovely........
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Nilotpal Sarmah
Lovely words.Truly befits the picture.
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Debs
Hmmmm the Orange blossom lovely.
 
seema chowdhury
Bold and beautiful.......
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Ency Bearis
remarkable haiku
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