The Last Sunset
We met on the
Sands of eternity
And watched the Sunset
Holding hands
I still carry the scent
Of those tears
In my bare palms
They say
Seasons change
But strangely my Earth
Speaks the same language
Day in and
day out…
seema chowdhury
A lovely expression of love.
A lovely expression of love.
angelic
Beautiful written ......with emotion feelings
Beautiful written ......with emotion feelings
Debs
Excellent few lines Sri.
Excellent few lines Sri.
kath
Though all else changes, your beautiful words remain Sri. A gorgeous poem! :) kath xxx
Though all else changes, your beautiful words remain Sri. A gorgeous poem! :) kath xxx
deeptangshu
Beautiful poem!
Beautiful poem!
GEETASHREE CHATTERJEE
Beautifully romantic and poignant. Reminds me of quite a few Bengali and Hindi songs...
Beautifully romantic and poignant. Reminds me of quite a few Bengali and Hindi songs...
carol
beautifully written
beautifully written
nimal dunuhinga
Excellent! As you say the same sad music all the seasons? We hear and keep quiet.............the same music for our good byes too.
Excellent! As you say the same sad music all the seasons? We hear and keep quiet.............the same music for our good byes too.
Chaos1214
The subtly expressed, and simultaneous, ups and downs of consistency.
The subtly expressed, and simultaneous, ups and downs of consistency.
heather wilkins
beautifully written.
beautifully written.
Nilotpal Sarmah
A beautiful piece.
A beautiful piece.
sugi
brilliantly carved the eternity of dawn and dusk. nice penning Sri..
brilliantly carved the eternity of dawn and dusk. nice penning Sri..
sonetta
and you speak the language of sublime, poem after poem!
and you speak the language of sublime, poem after poem!
Sands of eternity ...holding hands...very nice lines romantic...regards