~ sometimes the words come but never make the page ~
Unwritten
Tender words of affection,
filled with an energy like none other,
should float, even sail through the air
effortlessly, kissing each soft, fluffy cloud
as they make their way
to your beautiful soul.
Instead,
they are heavily weighted
and they plummet to the pages below,
smudging in the puddle of diluted ink
that never seems to fully dry.
Here gather the crumpled pages of my heart.
michael burke
A most beautiful tender poem Nadine. Loved it !
A most beautiful tender poem Nadine. Loved it !
Frank Lambert
Idk, maybe its because I haven't read your stuff in a while, but you seem to have a different voice. I like this voice a lot.
Idk, maybe its because I haven't read your stuff in a while, but you seem to have a different voice. I like this voice a lot.
Simply Bono Razek
extra beautiful-Nadine..but laced with a sadness ...I like your closing line a lot
extra beautiful-Nadine..but laced with a sadness ...I like your closing line a lot
Lynda Robson
what a beautiful write Nadine, heartfelt and the last line says it all, excellent poetry my friend
what a beautiful write Nadine, heartfelt and the last line says it all, excellent poetry my friend
Sylvia Marquetta
Nadine, the emotional sense of feelings in this poem is exquisite.....I love it. :-)
Nadine, the emotional sense of feelings in this poem is exquisite.....I love it. :-)
La Finita
A heart felt portrait of how much it hurts to hide our feelings. ...still you managed to write them down, well done!
A heart felt portrait of how much it hurts to hide our feelings. ...still you managed to write them down, well done!
heather wilkins
here gathers the crumpled pages of myheart. sad. but lovely write.
here gathers the crumpled pages of myheart. sad. but lovely write.
James T. Adair
It is sad to have feelings of love that cannot reach the one who remains bright in your heart. The feelings seem lost and useless but you cannot ever erase them. They belong just to that person until you meet them again. You hope, if not in this dimension...maybe in another. The feelings cannot just mean nothing when they are felt so strongly in your heart. Hard to express them
It is sad to have feelings of love that cannot reach the one who remains bright in your heart. The feelings seem lost and useless but you cannot ever erase them. They belong just to that person until you meet them again. You hope, if not in this dimension...maybe in another. The feelings cannot just mean nothing when they are felt so strongly in your heart. Hard to express them
seema chowdhury
Lovely an written with a lot of feelings.
Lovely an written with a lot of feelings.
ju
i love this--- a clever write. beautifully described "...they are heavily weighted and they plummet" is so good.
i love this--- a clever write. beautifully described "...they are heavily weighted and they plummet" is so good.
Joy
I love this!! Cause I know the feeling well! It's hard to put into words what our heart and soul is speaking or feeling...
I love this!! Cause I know the feeling well! It's hard to put into words what our heart and soul is speaking or feeling...
Botan
nice poem
nice poem
Chaos1214
I know the feeling. Sometimes there just are no words that can come close to describing the emotions. Very sharply expressed.
I know the feeling. Sometimes there just are no words that can come close to describing the emotions. Very sharply expressed.
a poignant write, well expressed.