Diametric
In the tidy confines
of a cluttered mind
rests the timid notion
that lines taunt human
flaws foreign to the
forces nature conjures
in graceful arcs and
orbits, waves of ripe
marrow rippling with
stippled energies
ever-coursing from
all bounding cells.
twilights descent
this is strange- but a good strange
this is strange- but a good strange
La Finita
Great rhythm ! I really enjoyed it .
Great rhythm ! I really enjoyed it .
Chaos1214
Ha ha... A dynamic diametric discourse.
Ha ha... A dynamic diametric discourse.
seema chowdhury
nicely written with a lot of energy oozing from each line.
nicely written with a lot of energy oozing from each line.
Fay Slimm
Love it - - love it John - - complete with phrases which make readers go over the content again to see those rippling ripe marrow-lines emerge with needed energy.
Love it - - love it John - - complete with phrases which make readers go over the content again to see those rippling ripe marrow-lines emerge with needed energy.
poeticpiers reborn
nature abhors straight lines
nature abhors straight lines
This is fantastic, the title just drew me in..diametrically. :)