Thirteen:

a hex slams the decks
in cosmic fashion
aloof, shedding proof
of boundless passion
covert to pervert
virtue left ashen;
once fed every thread
begs for compassion.

heather wilkins
short and full of meaning.

twilights descent
this is awesome- second one i have read from you in this short style - think its really effective

ju
brilliant.

Debs
Excellent penning.

Fay Slimm
A statement of the horror of perverted passion and its dreaded aftermath - -wrapped well in fine alliteration. Wonderful read.

stevenstirk
Brilliant !

Lynda Robson
Great use of words