Please read Gita's chilling "And She was Gone "
And She Was Gone – Part 5
In a moment ..
She disseminated into night
millions of darkness’s particles
I could hear her anklets
wandering through the wet roads
Her perfume still lingered
in my half empty car
The winds came to a screeching halt
The leaves smelled of something I could not recall.
The calm was maddening
The rain fell in straight vertical drops
Why were the droplets assuming different shapes ?
I desperately wanted some chaos
Something to tell me I was wrong
Maybe I was drunk …
Was I ?
My prayers were answered as a shot
Rang through the sheets of rain…
I suddenly realized
I was witnessing shards of my skull
On the wet ..
Slippery road…
“Rapist”…
Muttered the voice still heavy
With perfume…
I wanted my sanity back desperately.
Once again the winds came to a screeching halt..
welcome back Sri. very touchy and scary too.
ooooh- wow. Sri this is brilliantly chilling... x
Cruelty painted with the colour of sadness!
Almost frightening with griping fear are the images you have painted with your mind here. ' I suddenly realized/I was witnessing shards of my skull/ ' ....like the Twilight Zone.
This is indeed heart shattering and a dark reality of our times ..may god bless humanity ...
This is truly - horror untimited Sri...you have a great imagination!!
Oooh! The tale twists again in this fine fifth part Sri. Where will it all end I wonder???? :) kath xxx
Wow! Sridevi, this is awesome! The story gets more and more interesting with so many poet friends contributing to it. I won't be surprised if in the end we get a spine-chilling paperback out of all this with many co-authors. Isn't this literary exercise fun?
And yet another one to add to Gita's but this is very very interesting Sri,.
wow things horror are made of
very heavy and saddening.