Dedicated to all the dead and alive clones.
Published on Sketchbook in July 2011 issue
Ladybug(A modern Haiku)
he is a bug
his name is lady
ladybug
Written on July,2011
©Munia Khan 2011
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
I'm laughing here! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
I'm laughing here! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Marie
Your wonderful sense of humour/fun shines resplendently in the words of this Haiku, Munia. I love your choice of graphic which compliments your words so well. Very potently penned, excellent write! Thank you for sharing, Munia. Blessings always...
Your wonderful sense of humour/fun shines resplendently in the words of this Haiku, Munia. I love your choice of graphic which compliments your words so well. Very potently penned, excellent write! Thank you for sharing, Munia. Blessings always...
Philip
A Pox on all Clones ...( I say )
A Pox on all Clones ...( I say )
magnolia
Oh, I missed this as I was away. Love it Munia, what a witty dedication to the unspeakable clones !...Maggie :))
Oh, I missed this as I was away. Love it Munia, what a witty dedication to the unspeakable clones !...Maggie :))
Lynda Robson
love this, as Bob says we call them ladybirds, don't know why :) but they do have wings and fly
love this, as Bob says we call them ladybirds, don't know why :) but they do have wings and fly
Bob Blackwell
We call them them ladybirds
We call them them ladybirds
seema chowdhury
very interesting ..........
very interesting ..........
Abhinav Baruah
:-)))))))))))))))))))... this one !
:-)))))))))))))))))))... this one !
Jenny Gordon
Darling tercet aptly characterizing the nefarious monster known but as a clone. Since the Japanese variety are the really nasty stinkers, it was quite the clever move to expose your ladybug in a haiku of sorts. Excellent and delightful! Eerie and chilling too! I like it.
Darling tercet aptly characterizing the nefarious monster known but as a clone. Since the Japanese variety are the really nasty stinkers, it was quite the clever move to expose your ladybug in a haiku of sorts. Excellent and delightful! Eerie and chilling too! I like it.
sonetta
ha-ha...so cute.....the poem, that is....as for the ladybug...he's a bugger!!
ha-ha...so cute.....the poem, that is....as for the ladybug...he's a bugger!!
Susan Jarvis
Inventive, clever and full of wry humour - a modern haiku after my own heart, Munia. Bravo!!! :)
Inventive, clever and full of wry humour - a modern haiku after my own heart, Munia. Bravo!!! :)
Kesav V Easwaran
A well thought out haiku, Munia...good indeed
A well thought out haiku, Munia...good indeed
vijay menon
Only three lines , this is the shortest i think you have written so far, interesting indeed.
Only three lines , this is the shortest i think you have written so far, interesting indeed.
Meggie Gultiano
he also comes like a thief in the night..Bwahahaa..and preys on person to be eaten or bite the skin..
he also comes like a thief in the night..Bwahahaa..and preys on person to be eaten or bite the skin..
Frank Lambert
Lol, what can I say? He is a bug...
Lol, what can I say? He is a bug...
Karin Anderson
You are right Munia as a bug is a fault in a computer (lol). I wonder if the bug is bugged by this highly original modern haiku? How about we collect money and the prize goes to the poet who captures the most bugs! I love this Munia and Stella's comment too! (lol)
You are right Munia as a bug is a fault in a computer (lol). I wonder if the bug is bugged by this highly original modern haiku? How about we collect money and the prize goes to the poet who captures the most bugs! I love this Munia and Stella's comment too! (lol)
Fay Slimm
Oh -- so clever this exposure-piece Munia.
Oh -- so clever this exposure-piece Munia.
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
And this little bugger is 7 years young !Question be,tho' is it androgynous?Lol! Young Lady, i'll make no bones about your clones, 'cuz this poem owns a home of its own & it's called Munia's Literary Zone !Enjoyed this, Missy! ~FjR~
And this little bugger is 7 years young !Question be,tho' is it androgynous?Lol! Young Lady, i'll make no bones about your clones, 'cuz this poem owns a home of its own & it's called Munia's Literary Zone !Enjoyed this, Missy! ~FjR~
Sandra Martyres
A power packed modern haiku which says a lot in just a few words..Impressive piece Munia...and so timely too!!
A power packed modern haiku which says a lot in just a few words..Impressive piece Munia...and so timely too!!
Ha ha... Any questions?