My musings-20- Stone
I tried pelting a stone at him
It failed to hit him
Or such things any
Despite being aimed well
It fell, wayside, miserably
My irking haste, I was in
I had wrapped it loose
In a paper thin-
A good poem page,
She offered me to read!
Happy days may stay ahead-
Unhurt, un-bruised!
~Kesav Venkat Easwaran~
August-18- 2011
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PrEmJi PrEmJi
ever one likes to treasure happiness....
ever one likes to treasure happiness....
Raj Arumugam
very striking imagery and phrasing, Kesav
very striking imagery and phrasing, Kesav
Lynda Robson
Good work Kesav, a thought provoking muse
Good work Kesav, a thought provoking muse
rarebird
There's much to think about here.
There's much to think about here.
Ron Peat
The poem's flow skips a bit rough, but the message reminds me of a poem by D.H. Lawrence called the "Snake". How an intent misses the mark and leaves the heart bare to all humanity. Even in darkness there is a discovery of what we are in every action. Quite a comparison I must say with dignity. A poet friend// RH Peat
The poem's flow skips a bit rough, but the message reminds me of a poem by D.H. Lawrence called the "Snake". How an intent misses the mark and leaves the heart bare to all humanity. Even in darkness there is a discovery of what we are in every action. Quite a comparison I must say with dignity. A poet friend// RH Peat
Munia Khan
Yet another fine musing here Kesav.Happy days may stay ahead!Great poem.
Yet another fine musing here Kesav.Happy days may stay ahead!Great poem.
Indira Renganathan
Loosely wrapped stone...in a poem-page thin paper given by her... thrown at him by him fell, wayside, miserably...doesn't matter..let her be his...Happy days may stay ahead- Unhurt, unbruised!....your usual mastering skill...well done Kesav
Loosely wrapped stone...in a poem-page thin paper given by her... thrown at him by him fell, wayside, miserably...doesn't matter..let her be his...Happy days may stay ahead- Unhurt, unbruised!....your usual mastering skill...well done Kesav
sathyanarayana
Happy days may stay ahead- Unhurt, unbruised An impetuous action and again an introspection...lead life towards a safer and more comfortable shore...so well penned.
Happy days may stay ahead- Unhurt, unbruised An impetuous action and again an introspection...lead life towards a safer and more comfortable shore...so well penned.
Karin Anderson
Goodness can override negativity and I really like Nilotpal's summation of this deep and meaningful write Kesav. Your last two lines are a triumphant conclusion~
Goodness can override negativity and I really like Nilotpal's summation of this deep and meaningful write Kesav. Your last two lines are a triumphant conclusion~
Gita Ashok
A well-penned write with optimistic closing lines!
A well-penned write with optimistic closing lines!
carol
fascinating thought
fascinating thought
Nilotpal Sarmah
Good poem for open for interpretation; The toughest things like dark days when wrapped with something warm as love can make it less hurtful and can convey a message to others just like the hurled stone conveys a page of poem. Great thoughts, Sir.
Good poem for open for interpretation; The toughest things like dark days when wrapped with something warm as love can make it less hurtful and can convey a message to others just like the hurled stone conveys a page of poem. Great thoughts, Sir.
Sandra Martyres
Meaningful musings Kesav....thought provoking too....great write
Meaningful musings Kesav....thought provoking too....great write
With your skill you will stay unhurt un-bruised and not unread....regards