See To Your Soul

A slice of imperfection
lets me see to your soul,
You try to hide it
but i know where to go.
'Cause we've shared secrets,
You and I,
I've made you laugh
You've made me cry.

But in the end,
We're back at the start.

Never together yet never apart...

Published January 18, 2010 Write a comment
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Maggie
beautiful, everyone I'm sure can relate. The last line is great :)
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Gothgolem
I like the way this feels as if it's going round in a circle. It's true our imperfections are what make others love us, not our perfectness.
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Carl Harris
Though fairly brief, this is a most expressive poem, Violet, and your phrasing is particularlly very effective in every line! Carl.
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sonetta
near yet far...a constant chase.....
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Susan Jarvis
The yin and yang of a perfect relationship ;)
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