That Summer XXX

Caress of light
vanishes daily
from our sand path.
Hedges's shadows
spread longer
and earlier, bit by bit.
And so I linger
in golden memories
chasing your kisses,
if I could capture
that first time picture
of you and me...
But season's changing
the wind blows chilly
dimming our sand path.
New horizons call me,
and I weave future,
-But that Summer,
that unique Summer-
will stay in me.

La Finita

LightH2O
Unforgetable memory, lovely!

kath
The XXX challenge may be yesterdays news, but this Laura is most assuredly a forever poem! :) kath xxx

mamta agarwal
So poignant and wistful, Laura; we make memories that last a life time! wonderful to make your aquaintance here. Thanks for love and appreciation. Ian must have had a tough time.

sonetta
so beautiful Laura....a summer to remember.....

Sandra Martyres
Another great entry for the competition..a beautiful write laura..Ian is going to have a tough time selecting !!

Ency Bearis
remarkable write , nice entry

carol
beautiful finita great entry

magnolia
So wistful a write..beautifully written...Maggie

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Ah, memories of summer that linger...and noone can take them away from those secret places in our hearts. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Kesav V Easwaran
Memories evergreen of an early summer on the eve of summer ending...nice poem nice entry, Laura...

Lynda Robson
This is so beautiful Laura, again a worthy entry for the competition....good luck, I think Ian will have his work cut out finding a winner

Fay Slimm
This is beautiful Laura - - a real touch of winner in this worthy entry for the triple X challenge.