A woman gently stirs

Twilight, just before the dawn,
shows pale your skin, against my touch.
A girl before this night was born,
a girl who had to give so much.
And now a woman gently stirs,
who smiles soft, in slumbered bliss,
When moved to yield, her treasure pure,
Her breath was held, within a kiss

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valerie jones
the tenderness felt when reading this is just wonderful
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MoonBee
Pure Poetry from the Heart ... The Transition From Girl To Woman, Simply and Appreciatively Put ... You've written with such class, beauty, innocence, joy and tenderness of all the wonderful emotions of the moment ... Well done Laurie ... MoonBee
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Jack Williams
Adult, but innocent.
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Karin Anderson
A beautiful Laurie Hill poem with tender words and a soft beautiful style. Lovely to find you on this site!
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Fay Slimm
Warmth and gentleness pervade this piece Laurie - - a delicate read with a lovely flow.
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