Inspired by my recent sunburn and... break up :P
Sunburnt
Like the clouds hid the sun
To help my skin heal,
You came after him
And taught me to feel.
But the clouds have parted,
I’ve started to rain.
You turned out just like he did
And I’m burnt again…
Desiree
great write violet :) like it very much..
great write violet :) like it very much..
Pendemic
Love the similes here, great way to express that situation of breaking up.
Love the similes here, great way to express that situation of breaking up.
TheLightGiver94
the moons love is so much more gentle, the sun's love, as said in your poem, burns you, which brings on pain. very good poem.
the moons love is so much more gentle, the sun's love, as said in your poem, burns you, which brings on pain. very good poem.
Lazarus Knix
Which is why I've always preferred a love like the moon. :) A nice sum of one's feelings upon a break up.
Which is why I've always preferred a love like the moon. :) A nice sum of one's feelings upon a break up.
Ouch! Don't forget the sunblock... Pity boyblock doesn't come in a bottle too.