Thought Catcher
Dream catcher catch,
Dream catcher spin,
Store all my nightmares somewhere within.
And while you’re at it,
Take some of my thoughts.
They’ll just bring more heartache
Until they are caught…
Gothgolem
A perfect poem in every way. It almost reminds one of some ancient jump rope rhyme.
A perfect poem in every way. It almost reminds one of some ancient jump rope rhyme.
Kerry O'Connor
Your dream catcher has captured my imagination (",)
Your dream catcher has captured my imagination (",)
Pendemic
Violet you have written one that could be marketed with the sale of dream catchers. Great write.
Violet you have written one that could be marketed with the sale of dream catchers. Great write.
David Taylor
Very catchy tempo so fitting the subject, good poem, David
Very catchy tempo so fitting the subject, good poem, David
Susan Jarvis
An innovative idea, a wonderful poem. :)
An innovative idea, a wonderful poem. :)
Violet Valkyrie
Thanx!:)
Thanx!:)
TheLightGiver94
WOWZERZ! i love this poem.
WOWZERZ! i love this poem.
A poignant and thoughtful poem, all the better for being so brief. The rhyming is very natural, and suits it very well.