Trying to break free from Waltz Wave for a while...let me know if you think it was a bad idea...
In a box
While my heart is broken
I keep it in a box,
A box with no key
As it has no locks.
Why? You may ask yourself
I asked myself too,
But then I found,
To heal my heart
I must give it to someone new,
A bad idea that never works,
And always ends in pain.
So my heart goes back to the box
Only to be given away again…
Joffre Luiz de Ponte
As beautiful and pure as the person that wrote it... It definitely captures the rollercoaster ride from relationship to relationship... Well done
As beautiful and pure as the person that wrote it... It definitely captures the rollercoaster ride from relationship to relationship... Well done
Gothgolem
I like the unusual feel of this; it may be about keeping your heart in a box but the writing does not feel boxed in by anything, it feels free and full of honesty.
I like the unusual feel of this; it may be about keeping your heart in a box but the writing does not feel boxed in by anything, it feels free and full of honesty.
Carl Harris
Well, somehow this charming poem reminds me of that woman Pandora, except that she kept a lot more than her heart in her little box, Violet! Let's hope the next recipient of your heart lets you have his in return. Carl.
Well, somehow this charming poem reminds me of that woman Pandora, except that she kept a lot more than her heart in her little box, Violet! Let's hope the next recipient of your heart lets you have his in return. Carl.
Desiree
a beautifully written poem :)
a beautifully written poem :)
Pendemic
It's an endless plight for some, but one day the true owner of the box will hold it forever.
It's an endless plight for some, but one day the true owner of the box will hold it forever.
TheLightGiver94
my heart WAS in a box, but then i found my love.
my heart WAS in a box, but then i found my love.
Beautiful!