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Silences Reborn #1
Hush Lover
Come paint my silences
in slow deliberate strokes
Show me not the canvas
where your signature
is a small insignificant scrawl
But drown me
in a plethora of sunsets
violet yielding
and tilting towards Dawn
Hold the rain
falling in crystal droplets
in the hollow of your thirstened palm...
and trace my words
towards the endless..
The clouds await
in eager anticipation
to drench us
Don't you know
the monsoon's always been a silent spectator...
Hush ...
Ron Peat
this is just beautiful. a poet friend//RH Peat
this is just beautiful. a poet friend//RH Peat
Sana Rose
Beautifully quiet and sensual, that we want to whisper the poem.. :)
Beautifully quiet and sensual, that we want to whisper the poem.. :)
shanmugam
an energetic poem shan
an energetic poem shan
Leonard Dabydeen
So beautiful ! The moment of arrival just to '...drown me/in a plethora of sunsets'...so much anticipation. It all makes the heart skip to a rhythmic beat of what is yet to come. First...Happy Birthday to you !! Best wishes !!
So beautiful ! The moment of arrival just to '...drown me/in a plethora of sunsets'...so much anticipation. It all makes the heart skip to a rhythmic beat of what is yet to come. First...Happy Birthday to you !! Best wishes !!
Debs
Don't you know the monsoon's always been a silent spectator.......excellent.
Don't you know the monsoon's always been a silent spectator.......excellent.
Susan Jarvis
Sensual, magical and truly beautiful, Sri - a real privilege to read. :)
Sensual, magical and truly beautiful, Sri - a real privilege to read. :)
narain, jay p.
Masterpiece.
Masterpiece.
Angelina Pandian
Such a downpour of emotions and longing.... Sri, you stir my soul with a red hot iron
Such a downpour of emotions and longing.... Sri, you stir my soul with a red hot iron
magnolia
Such a beautiful poem this is Sri. Beautiful lines..Maggie
Such a beautiful poem this is Sri. Beautiful lines..Maggie
Karin Anderson
The third verse is awesome and I see a smile from you and your dreamy verse may speak of love Shhhhh
The third verse is awesome and I see a smile from you and your dreamy verse may speak of love Shhhhh
sugi
Excellent Sri... Carefully chosen words..!
Excellent Sri... Carefully chosen words..!
Fay Slimm
Sorry Sri but my comment got lost somehow - - loved and bookmarked this verse.
Sorry Sri but my comment got lost somehow - - loved and bookmarked this verse.
Gita Ashok
"in a plethora of sunsets violet yielding and tilting towards Dawn". Fabulous imagery in this well-penned write, Sridevi.
"in a plethora of sunsets violet yielding and tilting towards Dawn". Fabulous imagery in this well-penned write, Sridevi.
Nikunj
Soft muse of monsoon mingles with silence producing a poetic drink that sozzles the mind and captivates the spirit ...
Soft muse of monsoon mingles with silence producing a poetic drink that sozzles the mind and captivates the spirit ...
Shashendra Amalshan
yes it is a masterfully crafted poem indeed Sri,. It is very nice to read and very touching... your poem kind of reminded me of Abhinav's latest poem, 'Self Portrait' also.. I felt that the poem is not all dark like some of your other works, but it has that undercurrent tone of melancholy too.
yes it is a masterfully crafted poem indeed Sri,. It is very nice to read and very touching... your poem kind of reminded me of Abhinav's latest poem, 'Self Portrait' also.. I felt that the poem is not all dark like some of your other works, but it has that undercurrent tone of melancholy too.
Sandra Martyres
Silences - very beautifully crafted Sri..good to see you posting
Silences - very beautifully crafted Sri..good to see you posting
Silences - very beautifully written with lovely expression. Significant, delightful and truthfully striking poem.