Friends , the hot sultry Summer months continue over Delhi with very little rain ! Here is a very short poem dedicated to ALL my poet friends , hope you will like it ! PS: In reply to this poem CAT has written a beautiful poem for me titled "Summer Romance" , kindly read that too !Thank you !
THE SUMMER'S WIND !
THE SUMMER’S WIND !
As I walked the lonely beach the other day ,
You had come in like the Summer’s wind, -
blowing in from the sea all the away !
You blew around enclosing me with your
swirling turns ,
Making me feel as if I was momentarily in
your loving arms !
You rekindled memories of days when we
walked the beach hand in hand ,
When we had playfully built our castles on
the golden sand !
Those days when your kisses were thousand
miles deep ,
And I in your arms use to fall fast asleep !
Then with the turning of the tide you went off
into the sea ,
Never looking back to see what has become
of me !
Now the water washes my feet as I walk the
beach all alone ,
And you remain in my mind playing like an
old Summer’s song !
- Raj Nandy
New Delhi
sarafielder
Ahhh...a "thousand mile deep kiss" sounds so romantic. What a passionate image it brings to mind!
Ahhh...a "thousand mile deep kiss" sounds so romantic. What a passionate image it brings to mind!
ritty patnaik
always on the lookout for these outstanding poems,crafted beautifully.enjoyed !
always on the lookout for these outstanding poems,crafted beautifully.enjoyed !
Palas Kumar Ray
Life is such a vast sea Raj which takes back everything too soon what it gives you a time.Memories are shells who remains with us.Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
Life is such a vast sea Raj which takes back everything too soon what it gives you a time.Memories are shells who remains with us.Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
Isabella Cecilia Maria
I came back again to read this one...
I came back again to read this one...
Ken e Hall
Very nice love in your memories as you walk alone, the reader follows your steps into a past gone by with an old summer song, lovely theme Happy new year Raj ...regards
Very nice love in your memories as you walk alone, the reader follows your steps into a past gone by with an old summer song, lovely theme Happy new year Raj ...regards
Munia Khan
Wonderful piece of work Raj.The concluding line makes it a gem.Thanks.
Wonderful piece of work Raj.The concluding line makes it a gem.Thanks.
jadia4708au
sweet memories of past... lovely poem sir....
sweet memories of past... lovely poem sir....
Isabella Cecilia Maria
beautiful poem Raj...was completely touched.
beautiful poem Raj...was completely touched.
Ron Peat
Sweet memories of love Raj, Sometimes the days move too fast and the beauty is lost. But there are certain weather that entwines us within there forgotten moments like glinting gems. Thanx for sharing this one. A poet friend//RH Peat
Sweet memories of love Raj, Sometimes the days move too fast and the beauty is lost. But there are certain weather that entwines us within there forgotten moments like glinting gems. Thanx for sharing this one. A poet friend//RH Peat
Scott Ball
beautiful poem-thats speaks of love - in so many way clearly, recommended.
beautiful poem-thats speaks of love - in so many way clearly, recommended.
robyn selters
Just delightful is this wonderful poem with its ebb and flow and nostalgic charm
Just delightful is this wonderful poem with its ebb and flow and nostalgic charm
Subhadip
Amazing..u mesmerize me..with details and yet simplicity..
Amazing..u mesmerize me..with details and yet simplicity..
Asoke Kumar Mitra
so nicely described,i read it again and again,,,,,,,,,,water washes everything..............and all alone.....raj babu bookmarked
so nicely described,i read it again and again,,,,,,,,,,water washes everything..............and all alone.....raj babu bookmarked
MBJ Pancras
Then with the turning of the tide you went off into the sea , Never looking back to see what has become of me ! these lines are quite impressive to me. 'What has become of me!' This is 'no care' attitude Fine!
Then with the turning of the tide you went off into the sea , Never looking back to see what has become of me ! these lines are quite impressive to me. 'What has become of me!' This is 'no care' attitude Fine!
Cat
I just had to read it again so lovely, cat
I just had to read it again so lovely, cat
Jenny Gordon
The summer's wind embracing, beautifully reminiscent of that almost mermaid that the speaker loved....wonderful imagery and lovely, haunting tale of summer loves! Excellent!
The summer's wind embracing, beautifully reminiscent of that almost mermaid that the speaker loved....wonderful imagery and lovely, haunting tale of summer loves! Excellent!
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Such a beautiful love poem Raj...You have painted a beautiful scene and rendered a treasured memory. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Such a beautiful love poem Raj...You have painted a beautiful scene and rendered a treasured memory. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
GEETASHREE CHATTERJEE
Beautifully depicted, sir!
Beautifully depicted, sir!
samanyan
the memories to be treasured...the separation gives a pain though
the memories to be treasured...the separation gives a pain though
heather wilkins
yesterdays memories are treasures never to be forgotten. lovely poem.
yesterdays memories are treasures never to be forgotten. lovely poem.
sugi
Nostalgic write-up Raj... Each and every line made me to feel the feel that you had...Beautifully carved with the tunes of the old Summer's song.!
Nostalgic write-up Raj... Each and every line made me to feel the feel that you had...Beautifully carved with the tunes of the old Summer's song.!
Prince Obed de la CRUZ
nicely written... the penning, the expressions, the everything!!! wow... keep it up, sir...
nicely written... the penning, the expressions, the everything!!! wow... keep it up, sir...
Karin Anderson
An engaging and smoothly flowing Summer Wind poem that delights the senses. Very much enjoyed Raj~
An engaging and smoothly flowing Summer Wind poem that delights the senses. Very much enjoyed Raj~
shanmugam
a lovely write. shan
a lovely write. shan
sathyanarayana
Very romantic..and truly poetic..really enjoyed reading this poem Sir...Thanks for sharing.
Very romantic..and truly poetic..really enjoyed reading this poem Sir...Thanks for sharing.
ritty patnaik
summer song is just like summer wine,which unwinds you to vision the memory of a special time ,which has remained inthe heart !loved it,truely raj.great poem !
summer song is just like summer wine,which unwinds you to vision the memory of a special time ,which has remained inthe heart !loved it,truely raj.great poem !
mamta agarwal
beautiful lyrical poetry Raj; You excel at all genres. Some memories remained etched in our mind and heart and we sing a bittersweet song. Every one who touches our life leaves a mark. lovely, wistful ending. thanks who said , it's beter yo have loved and lost then never to have loved at all...
beautiful lyrical poetry Raj; You excel at all genres. Some memories remained etched in our mind and heart and we sing a bittersweet song. Every one who touches our life leaves a mark. lovely, wistful ending. thanks who said , it's beter yo have loved and lost then never to have loved at all...
Ken e Hall
Sentimentel beach days wind swept bring such a great memory of bygones, our local beach is aptly called Dreamtime beach like your poem...regards
Sentimentel beach days wind swept bring such a great memory of bygones, our local beach is aptly called Dreamtime beach like your poem...regards
Susan P. Bagley
Lovely memory of love lost but cherished. Very nice.
Lovely memory of love lost but cherished. Very nice.
Raj Arumugam
beautiful, lyrical, very moving too, Raj Nandy...
beautiful, lyrical, very moving too, Raj Nandy...
Cat
Beautiful melanchily of a poem, I like poem tag and shall write you one! Cat
Beautiful melanchily of a poem, I like poem tag and shall write you one! Cat
oskar
sad and true poem... love often end like that
sad and true poem... love often end like that
Bob Blackwell
Song of past love, memories that still return to warm the heart, with perhaps a little longing. Lovely poem Raj I enjoyed the read
Song of past love, memories that still return to warm the heart, with perhaps a little longing. Lovely poem Raj I enjoyed the read
Ravi Sathasivam
Very touching and romantic poem. Well penned.tfs
Very touching and romantic poem. Well penned.tfs
Sylvia Marquetta
A lovely poem of romantic memories from the past. I enjoyed reading each line, beautiful and touching.
A lovely poem of romantic memories from the past. I enjoyed reading each line, beautiful and touching.
Ron Peat
Ha! Kisses a thousand miles deep. What a dream that is. I want to take that journey for sure. A lover that never stops kissing is just like the sea. Wonderful image Raj. A poet friend//RH Peat
Ha! Kisses a thousand miles deep. What a dream that is. I want to take that journey for sure. A lover that never stops kissing is just like the sea. Wonderful image Raj. A poet friend//RH Peat
heather wilkins
this is a beautiful love poem. So many great phrases. one of your very best. great writing.
this is a beautiful love poem. So many great phrases. one of your very best. great writing.
Kesav V Easwaran
beautiful verse...romantic nostalgia sings a summer song...nice read...enjoyed much
beautiful verse...romantic nostalgia sings a summer song...nice read...enjoyed much
Fay Slimm
There are some deep and meaningful turns of phrase in this verse on Summer Wind - - and Raj the reading came alive with your memories and ended thoughtfully on wistful notes. An imaginative write and an engaging read.
There are some deep and meaningful turns of phrase in this verse on Summer Wind - - and Raj the reading came alive with your memories and ended thoughtfully on wistful notes. An imaginative write and an engaging read.
Ata
sweetly romantic ,tfs
sweetly romantic ,tfs
Simply Bono Razek
I not only enjoyed it...I absolutely love it...these words are so beautiful "Those days when your kisses were thousand miles deep , And I in your arms use to fall fast asleep !.....Excellent write Raj !
I not only enjoyed it...I absolutely love it...these words are so beautiful "Those days when your kisses were thousand miles deep , And I in your arms use to fall fast asleep !.....Excellent write Raj !
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Oh Raj, how lovely...A beautiful painting with words you have created here...I can hear Summer's song...a song of longing echoing through this heart rendering verse. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Oh Raj, how lovely...A beautiful painting with words you have created here...I can hear Summer's song...a song of longing echoing through this heart rendering verse. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Meggie Gultiano
thanks Raj, enjoyed reading this..I love your line here.."Never looking back to see what has become of me"
thanks Raj, enjoyed reading this..I love your line here.."Never looking back to see what has become of me"
Sorry for my belated comment and this is one of the greatest love songs I ever heard!