It feels good to smile after what seems like an eternity ...

Light

Come
Bring on to me your light
Coated with lavender coated whispers

Show me “Us”
As we course
those unchartered waters

Soak me
Saturate me
With that just
One gaze of yours

Burn me
And in your embrace
Let me taste my …

…unified …
…endless Birth…

cyclopseven
Divinity warps us eternally. As we remove the veil imposed by mind, the merging takes place gradually, and I believe when it is complete, eternity remains.

Raj Arumugam
Show me “Us” - that'a a very inspired line so apt and integral to this inspired poem, sridevi

anupam
So passionate...

shanmugam
subtle feelings. thanks.

Anees Ahmed
beautiful

heather wilkins
great love poem. love it.

Leonard Dabydeen
Like a beautiful rendition of faith and love. In a melodious song, I'd have the third stanza for my chorus...how can one not miss you ?

Nikunj
Longings and hopes embroider this piece with creative frame of mind ...the poem sings a song , says it all to the readers ....wonderful as always ..

eleanor prince
Wow! I love the way you can build suspense and joy and bring things to a perfect conclusion

Ency Bearis
lovely poem

Fay Slimm
Excellent Sri. - love that phrase "lavender-coated whispers"

Chaos1214
I sense an unwritten warning here... A tempting invitation that sounds a little like a dare.

nimal dunuhinga
A humble request with a true smile and then in the light I am sure you see the dark side of life!

Munia Khan
I am enlightened with this fascinating work Sri.Wonderful piece of poetry.

Sana Rose
It's been long since I read poetry and yours, too.. And it feels a light-filled return... Warm write, sri...

Dream Weaver
Lovely writing Sri...

Karin Anderson
It lovely to know you are smiling sridevi. A light filled beautiful poem~

La Finita
Lovely piece. The last two lines, superb!

 

Anu a
wow...

Sandra Martyres
Wow Sri...that was a very passionate love poem

Debs
OOh that is love! Keep smiling!