inspired by La Finita's poem "Wrong Bus"
http://www.poetfreak.com/text/106839/wrong-bus.html
Lost?
she is lost...
or so it seems--everything around her looks
a little strange
did she miss her stop
did she lose her way
or could it be things have changed so much
since she went away
she is lost...
or so it seems--or could it be that yesterday
was just a dream
© 2011 Sonya Florentino
photo by Matt Borkowski
http://www.flickr.com/photos/mattborkowski/4704483008/
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Perfectly you...Love it! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Perfectly you...Love it! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Ron Peat
Oh, Sonya, I love this poem. It's déjà vu, And the past, present and future are one. Has spirit climbed the same mountain again or crossed the same burning desert? We must question our own existence again while walking or water or fire. We are confused in the moment's lesson as it repeats itself. This is very well done. A poet friend//RH Peat
Oh, Sonya, I love this poem. It's déjà vu, And the past, present and future are one. Has spirit climbed the same mountain again or crossed the same burning desert? We must question our own existence again while walking or water or fire. We are confused in the moment's lesson as it repeats itself. This is very well done. A poet friend//RH Peat
Jenny Gordon
Ugh! The horror of being lost! This conveys it beautifully both in the perfect visual image and the poem, evoking the lurking horror, and delightfully suggesting the deeper cause. Lovely! I really like it, though it stirs that terror of its reality.
Ugh! The horror of being lost! This conveys it beautifully both in the perfect visual image and the poem, evoking the lurking horror, and delightfully suggesting the deeper cause. Lovely! I really like it, though it stirs that terror of its reality.
Meggie Gultiano
perfect to a T, this piece and the graphic.
perfect to a T, this piece and the graphic.
heterodynemind
Wow, no one writes like you do, this sounds like a song. I can imagine it the centerpiece/starter of some very mysterious movies. ;)
Wow, no one writes like you do, this sounds like a song. I can imagine it the centerpiece/starter of some very mysterious movies. ;)
La Finita
Yes! That's how I've been feeling recently. The photo matches perfectly. I'm flattered my little poem inspired you, Sonya. Blessings
Yes! That's how I've been feeling recently. The photo matches perfectly. I'm flattered my little poem inspired you, Sonya. Blessings
Raj Arumugam
words and picture are a perfect fit - and the poem flows with emotion and smoothly too
words and picture are a perfect fit - and the poem flows with emotion and smoothly too
aryaindia
I lost my mum recently and I felt that this poem made me feel so much better in mind and heart. Thank you so much sonetta
I lost my mum recently and I felt that this poem made me feel so much better in mind and heart. Thank you so much sonetta
Susan Jarvis
Oh, how you capture that feeling of disorientation perfectly in this poem that uses repetition to great effect... it gives that feeling of going round in circles. Great stuff!! :)
Oh, how you capture that feeling of disorientation perfectly in this poem that uses repetition to great effect... it gives that feeling of going round in circles. Great stuff!! :)
Ben Gieske
Great combination. She's certainly in an unfamiliar area. It looks like she is carrying a camera, so she must be a tourist. I like our arrangement and internal rhymes.
Great combination. She's certainly in an unfamiliar area. It looks like she is carrying a camera, so she must be a tourist. I like our arrangement and internal rhymes.
Karin Anderson
The perfect picture for your theme Sonya and dreamy poets like me can certainly get lost, particularly in another city. An intriguing poem indeed!
The perfect picture for your theme Sonya and dreamy poets like me can certainly get lost, particularly in another city. An intriguing poem indeed!
Sandra Martyres
Very well composed Sonya..the feeling of being lost is perfectly captured in your choice of words
Very well composed Sonya..the feeling of being lost is perfectly captured in your choice of words
Chaos1214
Cool existential exposition. I can't imagine how we survived before GPS : 0
Cool existential exposition. I can't imagine how we survived before GPS : 0
Kesav V Easwaran
i love the phrasings of the words inside this write...and the chosen image- a crown
i love the phrasings of the words inside this write...and the chosen image- a crown
Fay Slimm
Inventive and clever portrayal of the chosen image Sonya. The question mark after the title gives intrigue to the content.
Inventive and clever portrayal of the chosen image Sonya. The question mark after the title gives intrigue to the content.
carol
good thoughts
good thoughts
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
I've been lost a few times myself from to time...Love your poem...have been lost in dreams too...Your poem has the voice of caring. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
I've been lost a few times myself from to time...Love your poem...have been lost in dreams too...Your poem has the voice of caring. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Mrigakshi
The one thats lost finds its track only after realisation of being lost . very well penned
The one thats lost finds its track only after realisation of being lost . very well penned
Munia Khan
I am lost into this lovely poem Sonya.Loved it so much.
I am lost into this lovely poem Sonya.Loved it so much.
Perfectly you...Love it! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing