Fresh Beginnings
Hush…
Hush…
How I loved the sound of first rain
And the ripples of your moon drenched whispers…
Mischievous monsoon
Enveloped us in her forever embrace
“Will you be mine?”
You said looking into my eyes
Did I have a choice?
The lengthening twilights never
Seemed more truthful!!
I was ready for my dawn
(For Ram…as we count the days to begin our new life together)
Angelina Pandian
Wishing you Happiness Always.
Wishing you Happiness Always.
Anees Ahmed
I am so happy to read this...
I am so happy to read this...
Leonard Dabydeen
This poem has all the richness of love. Good write. ' Did I have a choice? ' and ' I was ready for my dawn ' . Beautiful. Enjoy your dawn...enjoy the sunshine in your life.
This poem has all the richness of love. Good write. ' Did I have a choice? ' and ' I was ready for my dawn ' . Beautiful. Enjoy your dawn...enjoy the sunshine in your life.
Sana Rose
'Did I have a choice...?' Oh so sweet... I can so relate to that one verse coz it's something I and my guy always say about...
'Did I have a choice...?' Oh so sweet... I can so relate to that one verse coz it's something I and my guy always say about...
Cat
ejoyable, Cat
ejoyable, Cat
William Bonilla
a beautiful write, a pleasure to read....peace be with you.....William
a beautiful write, a pleasure to read....peace be with you.....William
nimal dunuhinga
When flower buds moistured with dew drops that coolness touches the burning souls!
When flower buds moistured with dew drops that coolness touches the burning souls!
Rahul Aithal
Touchy write, Sri.
Touchy write, Sri.
eleanor prince
I love the sumptuous ways in which you describe such romantic times
I love the sumptuous ways in which you describe such romantic times
narain, jay p.
excellent and sweet poem.
excellent and sweet poem.
Chaos1214
So cool! What better sight is there then the shining sun after a storm?
So cool! What better sight is there then the shining sun after a storm?
seema chowdhury
Beautiful.
Beautiful.
KAUSIK
a beautiful great, poem mam. :)
a beautiful great, poem mam. :)
Gita Ashok
As beautiful as the first rain. Best wishes and blessings, Sridevi.
As beautiful as the first rain. Best wishes and blessings, Sridevi.
sonetta
what a wonderful place to be....at the cusp of a new beginning...
what a wonderful place to be....at the cusp of a new beginning...
Kesav V Easwaran
it must be a nice begining- to read further into life! nice write
it must be a nice begining- to read further into life! nice write
PrEmJi PrEmJi
promises are to keep! blessings!
promises are to keep! blessings!
Sandra Martyres
A beautiful poem of hope and new beginnings!!
A beautiful poem of hope and new beginnings!!
Abhinav Baruah
Monsoon and rain bring too many things to our mind.. A refreshed mind suddenly feels nostalgic .... Beautiful poem... Enjoy the fragrances of monsoon and a new dawn..
Monsoon and rain bring too many things to our mind.. A refreshed mind suddenly feels nostalgic .... Beautiful poem... Enjoy the fragrances of monsoon and a new dawn..
Nikunj
Breaths of a new dawn , spirit of a new spring , the sweet lashings of monsoon ..mark a begining thats as green as ever ...god bless all 4 ...
Breaths of a new dawn , spirit of a new spring , the sweet lashings of monsoon ..mark a begining thats as green as ever ...god bless all 4 ...
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Ahhh,yes, your momsoon season...Hoping that you & yours made it through the worst(not so much the rain....but all the time ththe kids were home when they had to shut the schools down) !lol!!!! Enjoyed this, Sri !~FjR~
Ahhh,yes, your momsoon season...Hoping that you & yours made it through the worst(not so much the rain....but all the time ththe kids were home when they had to shut the schools down) !lol!!!! Enjoyed this, Sri !~FjR~
La Finita
Honest, so sweetly crafted. Beautiful! Blessings!
Honest, so sweetly crafted. Beautiful! Blessings!
God bless you Sri.